Matrimonial Vista
The honor of your presence is requested...15 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written ten-word poem and a beautiful sunset that you give a purpose to. A marriage of the waning day to the rising night that we see and experience with our own eyes.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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A very well-written ten-word poem and a beautiful sunset that you give a purpose to. A marriage of the waning day to the rising night that we see and experience with our own eyes.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Sandra!
Comment from zanya
Interesting use of imagery to convey the perspective at the close of day between 'waning day to rising night' and a lovely visual to illustrate -thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Interesting use of imagery to convey the perspective at the close of day between 'waning day to rising night' and a lovely visual to illustrate -thanks for sharing
Comment Written 09-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I've never thought of the night rising before so this is unique. I have alway thought of the night descending as the sun disappears and the night falls, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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I've never thought of the night rising before so this is unique. I have alway thought of the night descending as the sun disappears and the night falls, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Gotta keep you on your toes over there, Dolly, or at least change up your perspective, yeah? ;) ;) ;) Thanks for your review and take care!
Comment from kahpot
Beautiful, poem and presentation, an absolute vision, wanning day to rising night, very well thought out, you say a lot in so few words, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Beautiful, poem and presentation, an absolute vision, wanning day to rising night, very well thought out, you say a lot in so few words, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Comment Written 09-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for your encouraging comments on this shortie, kahpot! So good to hear from you... take care over there!
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Lovely! What whimsical, unexpected imagery--witty title and subtitle are perfect for the piece. I've got to remember this one; it is fresh and clever. Cheers. LIZ
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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Lovely! What whimsical, unexpected imagery--witty title and subtitle are perfect for the piece. I've got to remember this one; it is fresh and clever. Cheers. LIZ
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Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for your delightful review, LIZ! What a wonderful way to get the day started! Take care!
