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Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Tornado!"
Bill and Cathy's hearts beat as one!

20 total reviews 
Comment from faith bosire
Exceptional
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Ooh my God, this is the best story I've read it is witty and gets you off the hook at the same time. It is a great combination and I love it a lot.
It is a very creative piece of work
Great job

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
    Greetings, Faith!
    Cathy and I "SALUTE," you for the awesome review. Best wishes and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Cathy and Bill.
Comment from Franklin Dillard
Exceptional
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This Chapter is one you don't want to put it down, but it has a nail biting end. Unless you have seen that funnel coming, you can only imagine. I was on 65 in Indiana and watched one pick up a semi-truck up and toss it like a match box toy.
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Franklin Dillard

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
    Greetings, Franklin! Cathy and I "SALUTE," you for the awesome review. Best wishes and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Cathy and Bill.
Comment from Saria/Shreyamsi
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OMG...This is so fascinating.. Love how you have tried to include different elements-Romance, Thriller, Sadness, Little Laugh.
The suspenseful ending disappointed me for I wanted to read on and on...till I finish.
Really well written l... waiting for chapter 4 impatiently

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
    Greetings, our dear friend! Cathy and I "SALUTE," you for the awesome review. Respectfully with Admiration, Cathy and Bill.
reply by Saria/Shreyamsi on 24-Apr-2020
    Your welcome!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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Ok . I know that I'm reading three books of yours ( I think). Is this the book about the heavenly angel? Like your story about the southern part of TN. We were there this past December and did visit your home town. Filled with tourist although it was rainy, cool.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
    Greetings, Rosemary! Cathy and I "SALUTE," you for the excellent review. Best wishes and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Cathy and Bill.
Comment from Ulla
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Well when it comes to you two there never seems to be a quiet moment. we go from the wild boar an animali'm very familiar with. It's a plague around here and ruins our land. but tornadoes like in the Midwest we have not. They are not to be joked with. I've lived through a cat 4 myself. All best. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
    Greetings, Ulla! Cathy and I "SALUTE," you for the excellent review. Best wishes and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Cathy and Bill.
Comment from damommy
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I was captivated by the scenes of the wild boar. Thank goodness it
ended like it did. I'm glad Billy recovered. I enjoyed the dialogue
of all the characters. The picnic sounded so inviting. Then, that
ol' tornado had to make an appearance. What an ending!

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
    Greetings, our dear friend! Cathy and I "SALUTE," you for the excellent review. Best wishes and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Cathy and Bill.
Comment from Tootie
Exceptional
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Oh, Co-author, don't you know . . . YOU are the tornado! And what a whirlwind you've taken me on since we've started writing together. I LOVE IT! You get 90% of the credit for this AWESOME chapter. Great research on rabies, too. I'm so glad Billy's okay 'cause Cathy sure is smitten' with him! Wishing you all the happiness you deserve and then some! A "SALUTE!" God Bless--You're the BEST!
Respectfully with Admiration and "Tons and Tons of Love!"
Cathy

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 21-Apr-2020
    WOW . . . a "SALUTE," Co-author! Guess what? I'm gonna tell all our friends, "I pay Cathy a $ for each kind word she writes on me." Right back at ya on all of the above. Look . . . "YOU ARE AWESOME AND BEAUTIFUL TOO!" Best wishes and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration and "A Cave Full of Love!" Bill
Comment from Teri7
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This is another very well written chapter with a lot of excited things going on in it. You used very good descriptive words. I can totally relate to tornadoes in Tennessee, as that is the state where we live. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings to you both. Teri

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
    Greetings, Teri! Cathy and I "SALUTE," you for the excellent review. Best wishes and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Cathy and Bill.
Comment from Elon Vaughn
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I'm from Western Kentucky, but know east Kentucky and Tennessee. I enjoyed your vivid description of the wild boar, having been on the farm, where there should have been NO animals, only to have a strange feeling and look behind me to see a big hog. I was scared, because those friendly beasts eat people. I've made it through a storm or two, and experienced those gale force winds. The hog wins.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
    Greetings, Elon! It is an honor meeting you. Cathy and I "SALUTE," you for the excellent review. Best wishes and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Cathy and Bill.
reply by Elon Vaughn on 23-Apr-2020
    Welcome, I look forward to more stories.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
    A "SALUTE!"
Comment from Ross E Silke
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It appears a lot of effort has gone into this story and you're developed the characters well with good use of quotation coupled with good descriptions. The boar is a unique and interesting character in this and we all have to really watch 'boars' in our lives as I have a few myself in mine as they can charge and gorge at you rather lethally and can be very dangerous. The tornado at the end was a grand surprise. It was original overall and that's what might make it more interesting to readers.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
    Greetings, Ross! It is an honor meeting you. A "SALUTE" for the excellent review. Best wishes and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Cathy and Bill.