Glimpse of Day
Close your eyes, open your arms, and remember with me...35 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 1-10-1, Glimpse of the Day, has the right set up and blows the right words our way to open us up for a sweet springtime experience.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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This 1-10-1, Glimpse of the Day, has the right set up and blows the right words our way to open us up for a sweet springtime experience.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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Thanx so much, Bill -- I honestly thought this was a 'blind' contest... didn't realize you'd all get this funny little 1-10-1... glad it was okay, though!! ;) :) Take care, sir!
Comment from Joan E.
I enjoyed your poetic use of homonyms in this 1-10-1 form, along with your use of alliteration and the parallel photograph. Best wishes in the competition and be well- Joan
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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I enjoyed your poetic use of homonyms in this 1-10-1 form, along with your use of alliteration and the parallel photograph. Best wishes in the competition and be well- Joan
Comment Written 09-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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Thanx so much for your review on this 'shortie', Joan -- always so good to hear from you over here! ;) Yvette
Comment from royowen
This is an excellent 1/10/1 homonym poem Yvette, the marvellous thing is these two homonyms couldn't be anymore different if you fried, heh heh, well done My friend, good job, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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This is an excellent 1/10/1 homonym poem Yvette, the marvellous thing is these two homonyms couldn't be anymore different if you fried, heh heh, well done My friend, good job, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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Thanx so much for your review on this 'shortie', Roy -- they are certainly nice and easy for a nutty teacher to 'find' the time to do! ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
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Well done
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I love the photo you choose to go with your poem, they area a perfect match.
They captured my attention from the start making me think soon we will be able to enjoy the freedom we have missed.
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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I love the photo you choose to go with your poem, they area a perfect match.
They captured my attention from the start making me think soon we will be able to enjoy the freedom we have missed.
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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Thanx for stopping by on this 'shortie', Miss Cookie -- they are the ones that a busy teacher can 'find' time to do, ya know?! ;) Always so good to hear from you! ;) yvette
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Your very welcome it is always great to hear from you also
stay well and safe.
Cookie
Comment from Rhymer
I
no longer possess a perceptive, keen,
eye.
Would this qualify for this contest, Yvette?
Hi there Dear Friend and Teacher, Are classes out yet, or can I ask a question or two please? My hand is up, and awaiting your attention! Lol.
I have no idea how one enters such contests as this, or others, Does 'reserving' a spot, automatically post your poem in that contest, or is there another area I have yet to find? One other query: how does one 'vote' for a particular posting? Sorry if I seem dumb Yvette but I find it very tricky to find my way in and around this site. I am thinking it might be best to move on. My vision is getting worse, I fear, and the 'experts' tell me to expect even worse. That is something I doubt I can handle. Sorry if I seem a little 'down' this morning, but yesterday was a hard working in the garden day, and my deteriorating vision, was brought home to me very strongly! I am thankful I laid out my many paths - two persons wide - but there's a ton of cleaning up to do now Spring seems to be coming back - fast! Sorry. I didn't mean to sound depressed, but life is losing much of what I have taken for granted for so many years, and my dear wife needs my help more now, than ever. Hope you're keeping safe out of harm's way? fondest regards Denis.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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I
no longer possess a perceptive, keen,
eye.
Would this qualify for this contest, Yvette?
Hi there Dear Friend and Teacher, Are classes out yet, or can I ask a question or two please? My hand is up, and awaiting your attention! Lol.
I have no idea how one enters such contests as this, or others, Does 'reserving' a spot, automatically post your poem in that contest, or is there another area I have yet to find? One other query: how does one 'vote' for a particular posting? Sorry if I seem dumb Yvette but I find it very tricky to find my way in and around this site. I am thinking it might be best to move on. My vision is getting worse, I fear, and the 'experts' tell me to expect even worse. That is something I doubt I can handle. Sorry if I seem a little 'down' this morning, but yesterday was a hard working in the garden day, and my deteriorating vision, was brought home to me very strongly! I am thankful I laid out my many paths - two persons wide - but there's a ton of cleaning up to do now Spring seems to be coming back - fast! Sorry. I didn't mean to sound depressed, but life is losing much of what I have taken for granted for so many years, and my dear wife needs my help more now, than ever. Hope you're keeping safe out of harm's way? fondest regards Denis.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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Ha!! Here's the request! No wonder I couldn't find it in the responses... oh, well, at least I remembered and answered, yeah? :) :) Thanx for your review on this 'shortie', Denis - much appreciated, sir! ;) Yvette
Comment from sunnilicious
That poem came out wonderfully. Nice accompanying picture. Also, the form is rather odd. You made it work. Great alliteration and play on the words blue-blew. Good s-word alliteration too. Nice work. Good luck in the contest :)
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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That poem came out wonderfully. Nice accompanying picture. Also, the form is rather odd. You made it work. Great alliteration and play on the words blue-blew. Good s-word alliteration too. Nice work. Good luck in the contest :)
Comment Written 07-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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Thanx so much, Alicia, for stopping in on this 'shortie' -- they are certainly the ones that a busy teacher can 'find' the time for! ;) Take care of you, my lady! ;) Yvette
Comment from Janetsue
This is a refreshing little poem. I especially with the cirrostratus cloud formation showing in the breezy photograph. Color schemes always catch my eye when they're synchronized with the message. Best wishes in the contest, my friend!
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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This is a refreshing little poem. I especially with the cirrostratus cloud formation showing in the breezy photograph. Color schemes always catch my eye when they're synchronized with the message. Best wishes in the contest, my friend!
Comment Written 07-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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Thanx for stopping in on this 'shortie', Janet -- they are the ones that a nutty busy teacher can 'find' the time for - lol! ;) Be safe! ;) Yvette
Comment from w.j.debi
Oh, you make me want to go outside and enjoy the sunshine and blue skies. Yesterday it was all gray and threatening rain. Nice play on words and excellent alliteration.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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Oh, you make me want to go outside and enjoy the sunshine and blue skies. Yesterday it was all gray and threatening rain. Nice play on words and excellent alliteration.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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Thanx so much, W.J. -- I honestly thought this was a 'blind' contest... didn't realize you'd all get this funny little 1-10-1... glad it was okay, though!! ;) :) Take care, my lady!
P.S. I'm answering reviews until my brain fogs out -- I was lecturing to a camera ALL day and I'm just tired - lol!! ;) Just one week's worth of lectures left, though... HOORAY!! ;)
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I'm not sure if it's a blind contest or not. You join a lot of contests so sometimes I just pop into your site to see if I missed anything recently.
Comment from Barbaraj1
Homonyms are such fun to work with. There are so many of them.
You chose blue and blew and created a very good1-10-1. poem. Very well done. Good image.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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Homonyms are such fun to work with. There are so many of them.
You chose blue and blew and created a very good1-10-1. poem. Very well done. Good image.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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Thanx so much, Barbara (good to hear from you again!!) -- I honestly thought this was a 'blind' contest... didn't realize you'd all get this funny little 1-10-1... glad it was okay, though!! ;) :) Take care, my lady!
P.S. I'm answering reviews until my brain fogs out -- I was lecturing to a camera ALL day and I'm just tired - lol!! ;) Just one week's worth of lectures left, though... HOORAY!! ;)
Comment from Shirley McLain
I like your homonym poem and the presentation. That blue really pops out. As far as I could see it was perfectly done. Great job and good luck in the contest. Shirley
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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I like your homonym poem and the presentation. That blue really pops out. As far as I could see it was perfectly done. Great job and good luck in the contest. Shirley
Comment Written 07-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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Thanx so much, Shirley -- I honestly thought this was a 'blind' contest... didn't realize you'd all get this funny little 1-10-1... glad it was okay, though!! ;) :) Take care, my lady!
P.S. I'm answering reviews until my brain fogs out -- I was lecturing to a camera ALL day and I'm just tired - lol!! ;) Just one week's worth of lectures left, though... HOORAY!! ;)
