Angels
a hundred word story26 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed the sentiments here as we live life all over again through the eyes of a child and enjoy new things for the first time through their sweet innocence, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
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I enjoyed the sentiments here as we live life all over again through the eyes of a child and enjoy new things for the first time through their sweet innocence, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from RShipp
What a great story-line for your 100 word flash fiction.
It is a complete story- just like it should be!
The picture was a perfect match. What great memories.
Best of luck in the 100 Word Story writing contest.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
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What a great story-line for your 100 word flash fiction.
It is a complete story- just like it should be!
The picture was a perfect match. What great memories.
Best of luck in the 100 Word Story writing contest.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ogden
A heartwarming slice of life, that likely will be especially appreciated by the grampa generation, probably the major component of Fanstory.
Stay safe, all of your clan!
Ogden (Don)
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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A heartwarming slice of life, that likely will be especially appreciated by the grampa generation, probably the major component of Fanstory.
Stay safe, all of your clan!
Ogden (Don)
Comment Written 07-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Don. Best wishes to your family as well.
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You're very welcome!
Comment from Minglement
Wow, this is a sweet, poignant entry for the 100 word flash fiction contest. So many of us seniors came from dysfunctional homes before there was a name for it. How blessed we are now to share these moments of pure joy. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest :)
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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Wow, this is a sweet, poignant entry for the 100 word flash fiction contest. So many of us seniors came from dysfunctional homes before there was a name for it. How blessed we are now to share these moments of pure joy. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest :)
Comment Written 07-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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Thank you, M, for the great review.
Comment from Earl Corp
It's very cool you were able to use an actual picture of your grandchildren to accompany your story. It's nice that they are able to pull you into the light with them. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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It's very cool you were able to use an actual picture of your grandchildren to accompany your story. It's nice that they are able to pull you into the light with them. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 07-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Earl.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
It's so funny when we get a second chance through the eyes of the younger generation. For a second you are stepping into their little universe, and you are just a child freed of all the worries of the world.
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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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It's so funny when we get a second chance through the eyes of the younger generation. For a second you are stepping into their little universe, and you are just a child freed of all the worries of the world.
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Comment Written 07-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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So true, Iza. Thank you for your review.
