Comment from Rmocruz

Exceptional

I truly enjoyed reading this exceptional poem; I can certainly relate to it.
The appropriate photo-art section compliments your theme perfectly.
Best wishes with this promising writing prompt entry.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020

Thank you, Rich. Came in third.

reply by Rmocruz on 11-Apr-2020

You're welcome Bill, my pleasure.
Congratulations!

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

I delightful short work with big heart. My grandchildren do the same thing to me. I am completely undone by them. I regret no sixer, for this is worthy. My best to you and yours, and best wishes for the contest, Bill.
Sal xo

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020

Thank you, Sal, for the kind review. Bill

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Hi Bill. This is a nice story of appreciation for the blessings of grandchildren. They are adorable. Seems like you're a good grandpa. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020

Thank you, Marilyn. Placed third.

reply by BeasPeas on 11-Apr-2020

Good for you. :)

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Yes, the innocence of a child is pure and delightful to be a part of it. Thanks for sharing your poignant story with its happy ending. Love the picture. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020

Thank you, Jan

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Awe, Bill, so he saw the joy in his grandchildrens' life, something he'd missed out on in his own youth. But now he'd achieved this goal a couple of generations down the line. That's how I read this. Good luck in the contest. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020

Thanks. Ulla. Came in third.

reply by Ulla on 10-Apr-2020

Congratulations!

Comment from Mark Valentine

Exceptional

That last line is so beautifully written, and it captures that feeling we old folks sometimes get at witnessing these scenes (cute grandchildren by the way) - a feeling that is part rejoicing in their current happiness, and part recalling your own happiness from younger days ("rejuvenated from light that shone through...").

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020

Thank you, Mark, for the kind review. Bill

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

Very nice, Bill. Having kids around does give a different perspective on things, a lot of things. Sometimes ignorance is bliss, or to be found in the unadulterated minds of the young.

I have a feeling this will do well. I certainly hope so
G

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020

Thanks, g. Came in tied for third.

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Bill, This very short story shows how childrens joy can change a mood and a person. It is good that the dysfunction cycle was broken.
Congrats on becoming the recognized writier.
Joan

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020

Thank you, Joan. What a surprise!

reply by dragonpoet on 10-Apr-2020

You're welcome, Bill.
Jona

Comment from Enoima Okon

Excellent

Hi Bill,

Sometimes looking at kids play can bring back our childhood memories too, and you were to relate that in just 100 words, impressive.

It's a good storyline and I enjoyed reading it.

Eno

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020

Thank you, Eno, for giving this a look. Bill

Comment from CrystieCookie999

Excellent

Neat account of comparing past and present, with a darling photo of grandchildren Liam, Kimberly, Emily. Kimberly must be pretty precocious to be standing like that at 10 months already. Love the 'g' alliteration in The giddy joy pierced his gloomy soul. Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020

Thank you, CC, for the kind review. Bill