Comment from DeboraDyess

Excellent

And yet, they're all in such a hurry to grow into adulthood. If they only knew! lol

Written perfectly according to the contest direcitons, so no corrections or suggestions needed. :)


Best to you and yours!

Deb

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020

Thanks, my friend! :) I'm happy that you enjoyed my poem!

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Isn't that the truth.... but that's just us old fogies talking...! ;) A great offering for this more-than-limited format! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;) ;)

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020

Thanks, my friend! :) I'm glad you enjoyed my poem! :)

Comment from Michele Harber

Excellent

You make a good point: enjoy childhood while it lasts. We adults know the unspoken follow-up sentence: you'll surely miss it when it's gone. This is a good use of the one-seven-one format, and I wish you luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020

Thanks! Thanks for the support! Much appreciated!

reply by Michele Harber on 06-Apr-2020

It's my pleasure.

Comment from RShipp

Excellent

You selected a good picture to accompany your poem.

True words. I think many of them want childhood to be over way to soon!

Best of luck in the "1-7-1" writing prompt contest.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020

Thank you!