Me and My Gnome Patrol
A Book of Rhyme for Young Boys17 total reviews
Comment from samandlancelot
Your children's poem was so much fun. I liked this from the five-year old's point of view. I especially liked all their hiding places, and the honored top shelf, on the left.
Well done!
Patricia
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020
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Your children's poem was so much fun. I liked this from the five-year old's point of view. I especially liked all their hiding places, and the honored top shelf, on the left.
Well done!
Patricia
Comment Written 05-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020
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Childhood friends of our own making... they're always there no matter our age!! ;) Thank you so much, Patricia ? have a wonderful day!
Comment from R. Vincent
haha at 'girly art'
this is a fun and memorable story in poem form with interesting characters built into it
it's good for kids and adults
nice work
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020
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haha at 'girly art'
this is a fun and memorable story in poem form with interesting characters built into it
it's good for kids and adults
nice work
Comment Written 05-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020
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Childhood friends of our own making... they're always there no matter our age!! ;) Thank you so much, R - have a wonderful day!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Poem For a Child writing prompt.
This fun verse tells of having an army of gnomes around the house.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the Poem For a Child writing prompt.
This fun verse tells of having an army of gnomes around the house.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 05-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020
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Childhood friends of our own making... they're always there no matter our age!! ;) Thank you so much, Sharon - have a wonderful day!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Those early years in families are remembered here in this fun offering about sticking together and making the most of life, I enjoyed the energy in this write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020
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Those early years in families are remembered here in this fun offering about sticking together and making the most of life, I enjoyed the energy in this write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020
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Childhood friends of our own making... thank you so much, Dolly!
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Whimsical, witty--I like the girly art under the bed! Sly touch that the youngsters won't pick up on but will bring a smile to the adult doing the reading. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020
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Whimsical, witty--I like the girly art under the bed! Sly touch that the youngsters won't pick up on but will bring a smile to the adult doing the reading. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 05-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020
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Childhood friends of our own making... thank you for your review, LIZ!
Comment from Eve Vasa
Hello Anon, great poem from the prompt, and so age appropriate. I enjoyed your good rhyming and rhythm, definitely one of your poetic attributes. I saw no errors and the picture was the icing on the cake, very cute.
Nice to read you today at FS and thanks for sharing this fun work, cheers, Eve.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020
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Hello Anon, great poem from the prompt, and so age appropriate. I enjoyed your good rhyming and rhythm, definitely one of your poetic attributes. I saw no errors and the picture was the icing on the cake, very cute.
Nice to read you today at FS and thanks for sharing this fun work, cheers, Eve.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020
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Childhood friends of our own making... Thank you so much for your review, Eve - it's always good to hear from you!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your fun contest entry, Mystery Author. I like the image and the color scheme. I like the story told from the gnome's POV. YOour lines flow smoothly with good rhymes to tell this funny story. I know young children will enjoy this poem. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020
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I enjoyed your fun contest entry, Mystery Author. I like the image and the color scheme. I like the story told from the gnome's POV. YOour lines flow smoothly with good rhymes to tell this funny story. I know young children will enjoy this poem. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
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Comment Written 04-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020
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Childhood friends of our own making... Thank you so much for your review, Jan
