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Don't Be Deceived

a contest entry

5 total reviews 
Comment from artisart4u
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Yes, that sounds like Satan.
You have the right amount of syllables for each line and it rhymes well.
Good luck on in the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2020

reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
    My Friend,

    Thanks so much for such an outstanding review, six star rating and best wishes, Stay safe and well.

    Blessings...Portia
Comment from RShipp
Excellent
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You have meet the requirements of the contest. Write a Limerick on any subject. Follow the form of a limerick. Rhyme a a b b a. Syllable count: 9-9-5-5-9.

A job well done. Satan is a tricky one!

I enjoyed the read.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2020

reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
    Thanks so must for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated.

    Blessings...Portia
Comment from Sally Law
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The devils's playbook is always the same. I just posted about this in "Hell's Bells" last week. He's still at it. We overcome Him by the blood of the lamb and the word of our testimony.

Praying for you and your son today. I have some symptomatic relatives although they haven't been tested. They appear to be on the end of it, finally.
Sal xoxo

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2020

reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
    Sally,

    Thanks so much for your review and comments. My prayers are with you and your family. It is good to know that the family members who were symptomatic are on the end of it and feeling better. Stay safe and well.

    Blessings...Portia
Comment from Patty Palmer
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A very powerful poem! Every word true! How is your son tonight? You are all in my prayers. Love ya!
All night all day
Angels watching over me my Lord
All night all day
Angels watching over me!!
the Lord and the angels are watching over your family
love Patty

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2020

reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
    Hello my Dear Patty,
    Thanks so much for your review, but more importantly for your prayers. My son is having fever off and on, chills and a very bad headache. When I spoke with him earlier today, he was coughing a lot but I could not detect him having a hard time breathing. Thanks so much for your love and concern, and the Angels are watching over me and my family, thanks so much for sharing that with me.
    Love you much!!!

    BIG HUG!!! Portia
Comment from lyenochka
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Amen! May the Lord protect us from the roaring lion that sees to devour and deceive us with his lies! Great job following with this limerick format 99559 - Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2020

reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
    Thank you my friend. May God keep you and your family in perfect health and peace.

    Lots of love...Portia
reply by lyenochka on 03-Apr-2020
    You, too! ♥