Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice artwork and
presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-The imagery creates a
vivid word picture and
tells a story, too.
-I also like the personification
of the moon: "Unable to resist her charm."
-A good ending with the lighthouse.
-A good entry; good luck.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020

Thank you!

reply by Pam (respa) on 03-Apr-2020

You are welcome.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the Etheree writing prompt.
This clever verse is nicely written and presented.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon

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 Comment Written 03-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020

Thank you!

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Oh, a lovely offering of the ocean and her beauty.... and hidden 'wile'.... Great job! ;) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls this evening! ;)

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 Comment Written 03-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020

Thank you!