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For One, For All

Let not your heart be troubled...

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Comment from w.j.debi
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Excellent form and formatting. You make a perfect cross. Excellent word chose for your message of hope. The final two lines sum up the theme and encourage us to watch out for each other.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
    Thanx for stopping by on this other 'shortie', Debi -- I'm looking so forward to having some time to really write again: 3 weeks...count 'em down!! ;) :) Take care out there! ;) Yvette
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written Trinet about the power of faith us much stronger than fear that will drain your will and take control over you while faith gives the power to control fear.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
    Thanx so much for your review on this one, Sandra -- always so good to hear from you over here! ;) Yvette
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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For One, For All
by Y. M. Roger


Hello, Yvette,

I love your presentation and the poem has an upbeat message for all. It's spiritual and hopeful. Good job, my friend.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
    Thanx so much, Gypsy -- just seeing that painted face with the haunted eyes is a wonderful 'perk' to my evening... thank you!! ;) Be safe! ;) Yvette
Comment from Ronni
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You are so right dear Yvette,
true hope is not so fragile or fickle that it cannot prevail over those
human events or world wide perils that confront or challenge mankind
time and time again. True hope's impulse and mission at such tremulous
times is indeed to "hold fast", 'reach out" and 'share'. Thanks for
the boost reminder with perfect reaching out photo! Direly needed
in these times for sure!
Love your embracing enthusiasms and encouragements so timely
and tenaciously presented dear witty Dixie Belle! Dearly missing
you too ;) :)!!!!
Love, blessings, Ronni

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
    Thanx so much, Lady Ronni -- just seeing that smiling face of yours is a wonderful 'perk' to my evening... thank you!! ;) Be safe! ;) Yvette
Comment from Mark Schardine
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True hope
Exists in
The hearts of those whose faith
Cannot be shaken by human events
Hold fast
Reach out
and share!

A poem whose form reminds us of a cross, reminds us also to remain steadfast in adversity.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
    Thanx so much for your review on this one, Mark -- always good to hear from you... ;)
Comment from Dawn Munro
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I needed that uplifting message, but it barely penetrates because I am so upset -- it's why I haven't been here a lot.

I have done too much sharing, and there are others far more deserving than the one I've been helping far too long.

This is a beautiful poem, and thankfully, most people during this crisis feel this way.

Stay safe, my friend.
XX
Dawn

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
    Thanx so much for your review, Dawn. I know I'm waaaaay behind, but the end is in sight now!! ;) I lectured ALL day to a camera so I'll be editing and whatever tomorrow (and I'm still grading...ugh!).... but, hey! I've got one week's worth of lectures left so only ONE more day of the camera... it's gonna wait til next week!! LOL!! ;)
    Tell him to leave - give him a deadline 5 days is reasonable - and if he won't leave, call the police! ;)
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
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You're absolutely right. I love the message conveyed in this. I know for myself that my faith and hope is in God who hasn't left us bereft and without hope. He has seen me through many near death experiences and I'm still here to tell about. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
    Be sure to share your hope with those who seem to have lost it, Jeffrey... waves and smiles and other gestures can mean so much with so much negativity on the airwaves... Take care, my friend!
Comment from Minglement
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Very nice entry for the Trinet contest. Beautiful presentation of the message of hope you shared, much needed in these uncertaian times. Well done. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
    Be sure to share some hope with those who seem to have lost theirs! A smile or other simple gestures and even cheerful greetings can mean the world to those overwhelmed with so much negativity on the airwaves... Take care, my friend!
Comment from BeasPeas
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This is an excellent short piece, illustrated well. We all have to hang on in this time. At least we can support each other. Best of luck in the contest with this fine entry. Marilyn

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
    Thank you so much! Have a wonderful sunshiny day with smiles and cheer to share!!
Comment from MARIANNE GI
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Indeed, we must not lose our faith, especially these days, we need it to be strong and also to share our feelings with people that can listen because that is a great comfort. Very nice work

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
    Thank you so much! Have a wonderful sunshiny day with smiles and cheer to share!!