Morning has spoken
A different type of morning15 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Amen, Brother Dip!! ;) :) Such a great offering that encourages us to not get any further apart.... and more than that, to look toward not continuing this in the future! ;) Thanx for sharing 'Cat' and your muse! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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Amen, Brother Dip!! ;) :) Such a great offering that encourages us to not get any further apart.... and more than that, to look toward not continuing this in the future! ;) Thanx for sharing 'Cat' and your muse! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 03-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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Hi Yvette i have just added another poignant song by cat stevens that I think epitomizes where we want this world to head just maybe this moral correction was totally necessary for a world that has had so much hate and greed towards other fellow man.
just a thought
respectfully dip
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is an excellent ppoem to describe our current situation and the massive shift in societal interactions, although being no more I doubt they can be called that now. I do not think we can ever go back to how things were last year.
I particularly liked "No conversation exchanged OH MY GOD what have we done!". It is extremely strange. There is nothing to stop us talking to each other - as long as it's from a distance. So why then have conversations dried up? the HSS scientists are going to have a field day analyzing and assessing all this once the crisis is over.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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This is an excellent ppoem to describe our current situation and the massive shift in societal interactions, although being no more I doubt they can be called that now. I do not think we can ever go back to how things were last year.
I particularly liked "No conversation exchanged OH MY GOD what have we done!". It is extremely strange. There is nothing to stop us talking to each other - as long as it's from a distance. So why then have conversations dried up? the HSS scientists are going to have a field day analyzing and assessing all this once the crisis is over.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much Katherine. I have also added another wonderful Cat Stevens song which I feel is very relevant.
Thanks for the wonderful supportive review.
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Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Sobering subject of which much has been spouted of late, much of it insipidly said, albeit sincerely so. One would be pilloried if he were to dare point out weaknesses in such pieces, hence the high-fives all around. This time I'm not operating on PC autopilot--you deserve all five of your stars. Cheers (?) LIZ
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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Sobering subject of which much has been spouted of late, much of it insipidly said, albeit sincerely so. One would be pilloried if he were to dare point out weaknesses in such pieces, hence the high-fives all around. This time I'm not operating on PC autopilot--you deserve all five of your stars. Cheers (?) LIZ
Comment Written 03-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much Liz.
I really take in and appreciate your review and that you concur with the intent of my verse.
respectfully dip
dip
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dip--I'm trying it your way today--not promoting despite having $41.31 in the till. The $27.65 (9.95 + 6 pumps) is a lot to spend for just a few more reviews beyond the freebies--of which I often get 3 or 4 despite the stated limit of 2. Either there's a lag in the cut-off such that fans jump in before they can stop, or fans review regardless--sans pay--when they get notification of a posting. Either way, I'm grateful for their support--yours included! Cheers. LIZ
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It is strange how wildlife just goes on and sings its song despite the threat to humans and I dare say they birds are loving this unpolluted atmosphere just now, less noisy traffic and I am hearing so many wonderful birds this morning on my balcony, a refreshing write Dip, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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It is strange how wildlife just goes on and sings its song despite the threat to humans and I dare say they birds are loving this unpolluted atmosphere just now, less noisy traffic and I am hearing so many wonderful birds this morning on my balcony, a refreshing write Dip, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 03-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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Thanks so much Dolly much appreciated are you still in Spain?. Well that's where I thought you were at least.
Hoping you are keeping safe and well
Comment from royowen
I actually sing this as one of my entertainment songs, with my troubadour group, (although not at the moment) and also in the food give away place where I'm solo. Beautiful job with this Dip, that how I starred out, writing lyrics for someone else's music. Well done, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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I actually sing this as one of my entertainment songs, with my troubadour group, (although not at the moment) and also in the food give away place where I'm solo. Beautiful job with this Dip, that how I starred out, writing lyrics for someone else's music. Well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 03-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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It truly is a beautiful song Roy and I think Cat's lyrics are beautiful and I have the deepest respect. I hope by being influenced by this song to write my words I have not taken away the beauty of it.
I would love to hear you sing this Roy have you got any thing of you singing recorded on youtube or anthing?
dip
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Not on you tube, bu I?m the studios
