Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written monorhyme poem about the comparison between rural and city life is quite a difference. The city is crowded with people in thousands while the countryside has good clean air to breathe.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020

The difference between the Serengeti and Durban! Thanks for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Badger_29

Exceptional

Very clever, I enjoy this with sets a good example 4 series of repeating rhymes.
I enjoyed the first stanza of the most, as it seems like it would be the hardest one to run repetitively. However, I did see one area where there may have been in error to add an "e," on to the "see,"

Blessings,

Brother Badger Cull

Darren

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020

Hi BB, your 6 star evaluation is an honor. And I?m glad you enjoyed my view.
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A fine comparison of life in two very different environments. I have never lived in the country so I don't know how I would survive, but I do live in the mountains but it is not far from the town, the second line, last word may need a fix, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020

Yours is probably the best of both worlds! Sometimes we are oblivious to the severe damage continued stress brings, mental or physical Thanks for reviewing
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

" concrete jungles built so high" very well said, this mono rhyme is an excellent read/poem, your last line is very fitting for this wonderful work, thank you for sharing this****kahpot

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020

Thanks for your complimentary review! I?m glad you enjoyed the comparison
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Wow -- what a statement and in that format, Trisha, you certainly hold your reader's attention1 ;) I'm sticking with the last one.... that's my home! ;) Thanx for sharing, my lady! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020

Thanks for your complimentary review! I?m glad you enjoyed the comparison
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

wow interrestingly done, love the rhyming words in each stanza and the descriptions made for this country girl makes me miss the outdoors. I would make beginning letters all small instead of using the two capital ones

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020

Of course, my proof reading ?ain?t what it used to be?
Thank you
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from samandlancelot

Excellent

BucketList,

I love your mono-rhymes and your love of rural settings compared to urban. I'm with you. Even though I don't have the farm and the land, I do enjoy walks in rural places.

my favorite line: beauty more than urban array.

Patricia

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020

Thanks for your great review
Hugs, Trisha