Under The Bridge Cafe
Please read contest rules first.17 total reviews
Comment from bob cullen
Please provide your address. Do you get many return customers or does that salmonella get them first time around. I must confess I loved your menu, in fact I'd like to make a reservation for my mother-in-law.
This was a very clever poem and a most deserving winner. Congratulations.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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Please provide your address. Do you get many return customers or does that salmonella get them first time around. I must confess I loved your menu, in fact I'd like to make a reservation for my mother-in-law.
This was a very clever poem and a most deserving winner. Congratulations.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the hilarious review, Bob. I really appreciate the generous stars and congrats, friend. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a great night.
Ron
Comment from Minglement
Holy cow, this entry for the This is serious contest is hilarious. Such dry humor, perfectly played and perfectly presented. My hat's off to you for your creativity in the artwork and well. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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Holy cow, this entry for the This is serious contest is hilarious. Such dry humor, perfectly played and perfectly presented. My hat's off to you for your creativity in the artwork and well. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Minglement. I'm glad you liked the piece.
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You're welcome. I loved it :)
Comment from Bill Pinder
Great job with this humorous writing about the serious issue of homelessness. It is easy to read with smooth rhyme. Thanks for sharing your creativity. Bill
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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Great job with this humorous writing about the serious issue of homelessness. It is easy to read with smooth rhyme. Thanks for sharing your creativity. Bill
Comment Written 04-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review and the big sixer, Bill. I really appreciate the generous rating. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a great weekend.
Comment from A. Willow Bends
You are right. We were to make something humorous from something serious. Why did you put that in your author notes? Did someone give you a low rating or a butt chewing? You made it into the contest, so you must have been on the right track OR they wouldn't have put you in?
I'm giving it a 5 because a) it is a good poem b) freedom of speech, even if someone has an issue with it and c) because I am a 61 year old female who does what the hell she wants to do! :)
Good Job!
Wendy
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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You are right. We were to make something humorous from something serious. Why did you put that in your author notes? Did someone give you a low rating or a butt chewing? You made it into the contest, so you must have been on the right track OR they wouldn't have put you in?
I'm giving it a 5 because a) it is a good poem b) freedom of speech, even if someone has an issue with it and c) because I am a 61 year old female who does what the hell she wants to do! :)
Good Job!
Wendy
Comment Written 04-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the great review, Wendy. The author notes were added because some folks were voting in the booth when many of the entries weren't adhering to these rules. That's why they were added. I really appreciate the generous stars, W. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
Bless his heart. I guess if you're homeless that anything could be on the menu. In this great country that we're in, their shouldn't be anyone homeless and hungry. Thanks for sharing this humorous, interesting, and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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Bless his heart. I guess if you're homeless that anything could be on the menu. In this great country that we're in, their shouldn't be anyone homeless and hungry. Thanks for sharing this humorous, interesting, and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 03-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Jeffrey. I agree we should take care of our homeless better than we do. I appreciate generous, friend. Have a great weekend.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is an ingenious contest entry. We need laughs, need to look at possibilities, need to learn how to survive with humor, and need not look down on survivors. Well done!
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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This is an ingenious contest entry. We need laughs, need to look at possibilities, need to learn how to survive with humor, and need not look down on survivors. Well done!
Comment Written 03-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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I appreciate the excellent review, Rebecca. Thank you for the generous stars and lovely comments. I'm glad you like this piece.
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I voted for this poem.
Comment from visionary1234
No need for confusion - your piece is great! Good rhythm, and (unlike most) VERY clever and subtle, rather than making the obvious cliche choices. Great work! :)S
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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No need for confusion - your piece is great! Good rhythm, and (unlike most) VERY clever and subtle, rather than making the obvious cliche choices. Great work! :)S
Comment Written 03-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, S. I really appreciate the generous stars and kind comments. I'm glad you liked my silly little offering. I hope you have a great weekend and thank you again.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Under The Bridge Cafe
Hello my friend
I like your poem about homeless cuisine. I can see how this qualifies for the contest. Homeless people have a hard time finding something to eat. Well done.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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Under The Bridge Cafe
Hello my friend
I like your poem about homeless cuisine. I can see how this qualifies for the contest. Homeless people have a hard time finding something to eat. Well done.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review and generous stars, Gypsy. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a great weekend.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a good job, Mystery Author, with your contest poem. Yours is a serious topic expressed in a humorous way. However, the humor doesn't hide how many this applies too in a land of plenty. Your lines read well with great imagery. Your picture is a good pairing, too. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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You did a good job, Mystery Author, with your contest poem. Yours is a serious topic expressed in a humorous way. However, the humor doesn't hide how many this applies too in a land of plenty. Your lines read well with great imagery. Your picture is a good pairing, too. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 03-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Jan. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the under the bridge cafe that have to be very creative to put food on the table. From odds and ends and a few scraps, everyone's hungry enough to eat.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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A very well-written poem about the under the bridge cafe that have to be very creative to put food on the table. From odds and ends and a few scraps, everyone's hungry enough to eat.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the generous stars and great review, Sandra. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
