Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 3-5-3, Traumatized, has the right set up and expresses the strangeness of being surrounded by danger, yet not strangled by fear. Good.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020

Thankyou so much Bill for your comments. Stay safe. Jen.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

That is certainly a word... as is unbelieving (even though the syllables don't fit). ;) A great offering for this so very limited format contest - thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020

Thanks Yvette.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Your art and words pair nicely, Mystery Author. Good job with the syllable count per line. Your message is one many will identify with, I believe. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020

Tha k you so much Jan for your commenrs.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

The state of mind, and status of living, in these traumatic days across the world, is well worded, you are worried alone in quarantine; human nature is truly depicted.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020

Many thanks