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The Corona saga

Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "The Inventory"
to keep my sanity in time of pandemic

9 total reviews 
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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I have thoroughly enjoyed every one of your short stories about this outbreak of the coronavirus. I think you have a great imagination and thoughtful attitude about what we should do to help.

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2020

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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You did a good job with your 'rant' about the situation at hand. I enjoyed reading your well-thought out words. You gave many examples and supported your conclusions well. Your book is coming along well, too. When finished, I believe you can look back with pride--even to those chapters that rant. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
    Thank you so much Jan, I really hope someone will see this book as a historical piece and give it a chance to live outside my quarters:)
Comment from Spitfire
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You should write material for stand-up comics, or be one yourself after we're allowed to take off the masks. Favorite lines:
In a normal situation, you will return those to the manufacturer, aka China. But, desperate times required desperate measures.

Distancing on-line, but getting to parties, because nobody thought to use the right terminology: physical distancing. (good point)
Whoever let this virus out is going to be famous LOL

Her face says: there is no hope you better go and kill yourselves. Nobody escapes Corona.

The old parents are getting pampared and are geting all the attention in the world. Finally, it feels good to feel appreciated!
(this is my category. If I should get the virus, I'll put my Do Not Resusicate form on the door.

This deserves a six for content even though there are several grammar and spelling errors. Doesn't matter. I don't have any extra stars left.



 Comment Written 04-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
    You review made me laugh, thanks for your honesty and encouragements I can feel a kindred spirit on the other side of this screen.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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I think I would like a clear sentence in the Aithor's note to say which wins out: governmental help or individual approach'es to the various ails that come in the wake of Corona. It is difficult for me to list all the points that have to be considered, and yet I need to do so.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
    No worries, in this stupid virus, there is something for all of us. For me the biggest disappointment is the bullshit of the medical system
Comment from Pearl Edwards
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I can feel your frustration in this journal write. Me, I limit the corona crap to a couple of hours of news time a day, and the rest I want to be entertained.
physical distancing as against social distancing - makes sense.I loved the last line.A few typing errors -God gave us a head full of ideas, (so we not ) using that apparatus... more often. - so we are not ? -
I distancesd - distanced -

crossed the Ocea (n) -
Now deying- dying
are getting(getting) all the attention
thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
    Pearl, I am so sorry for my delay in acknoweledging your wonderful review and your grammar corrections. Millions thanks and Happy Easter, my friend.
Comment from lyenochka
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You're so funny! I don't think honking is a good idea either. I don't have any street-facing window so putting teddy bears there won't cheer up anyone. I liked your rant to Greta. No one is getting any air time now.

There were a bunch of errors but I won't list them all. Some I remember are: "carp" instead of "crap" and "cheating to Sophie" instead of "on Sophie" and "dyeing" instead of "dying."

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
    Thanks my friend I was half asleep when I posted this..after midnight...so oh, crap:)lots of mistakes.
Comment from estory
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Interesting comment about the PHYSICAL distancing. I didn't think about this, but of course this could be true. But young people, with all their hormones going crazy, are hard to keep apart. Actually, it's the old people who are most at risk here. We need to test for immunity, and then whoever has immunity can go back out and work and socialize. They should have been ahead of this a bit but I think it is true that it appears China lied about this. They had hundreds of thousands of deaths and they covered it up. estory

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
    Thank you so much my friend for your wonderful review as always stay safe.
Comment from royowen
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I've never in my life seen so many terrified people. Although it's a new thing, I'm sure it's controllable, our seems to be on top of it, most of our infections were acquired overseas, although we've got so many cruise ships toting lots of Covid-19 cases, well done Iza, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
    Thank you so much, Mr. Roy, probably now there are no more ships:)
reply by royowen on 03-Apr-2020
    Well don
Comment from patcelaw
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This is a whole new world to the ones in our midst who are of a very friendly nature. I love to speak, hug and shake hands with people, so it is just best for me to stay in at this time.
Patricia

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
    Stay tune for a story about this from Corona time.