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Dark to Light

A 3-5-3 contest poem...

5 total reviews 
Comment from Sally Law
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

A six for this one, dear Diana. Our writing sheds light in the dark world and we must shine our lights brightly in the end times. Our president knows about this and those who are involved in these heinous practices. I was most glad to see this and near the good news amidst the pandemic.
Sending you my best today as always and six stars.
Sal xoxoxoxoxo

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
    Gosh, I really am behind and so apologize! You know your support means so much to me! xoxoxoxo
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
    Gosh, I really am behind and so apologize! You know your support means so much to me! xoxoxoxo
Comment from Bill Schott
Excellent
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This 3-5-3, Dark to Light, has the right set up and hints to a secret operation that reaches into the darkness of controlling others' lives illegally. ....

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
    We can only hope that, as it has been hinted at by many, human trafficking and other horrid things are coming to an end. Apprreciate you stopped to read this! xoxo Sorry for the delay in responding.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Excellent
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They're pretty much locked away right now, yeah? A great offering for this so very limited format contest - thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
    yep, pretty much! And thank you very much!
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Excellent
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I like the image and the message. A good one in general and an apt one in particular per your footnotes. I root for the children and give three cheers (and five stars) too you. CCCHeers. LIZ

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
    Thank you for appreciating. Drugs and human trafficking are on the edge of total exposure. I don?t think much will be the same after this pandemic is over. Be safe! xoxo
Comment from Gloria ....
Excellent
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Well I had never heard of the secret tunnel under Central Park. It does sound interesting and there might be a few things in that tunnel.

Your entry into this contest is written to specifications, and the sentiment vivid.

Many thanks for sharing and I wish you much luck in the voting booth. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
    Thank you for reading! I have heard some things that suggests a wide-sweep of not only drug dealers, but also human traffickers. And they are bringing the children to safety. I?m sure It is extremely necessary to bring them to safety covertly, because the media frenzy would be atrocious. I can only hope and pray that the info is revealed as true for their sakes.