Eerie !
Poem 3/5/35 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-5-3, Eerie!, has the right set up and sets the tone for how we will see our once busy streets for the next month. The silence and stillness will be mind-numbing soon.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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This 3-5-3, Eerie!, has the right set up and sets the tone for how we will see our once busy streets for the next month. The silence and stillness will be mind-numbing soon.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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Yes -strange times -thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from gingermo
What appeals to me in this little poem is that it captures brilliantly the mood of the times. The repetition of the sibilant 's' is most effective and the internal rhyme of 'eerie streets,' adds to the feeling of loneliness the poem so imaginatively displays. Only three lines but I think an exceptional three lines. Well done!
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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What appeals to me in this little poem is that it captures brilliantly the mood of the times. The repetition of the sibilant 's' is most effective and the internal rhyme of 'eerie streets,' adds to the feeling of loneliness the poem so imaginatively displays. Only three lines but I think an exceptional three lines. Well done!
Comment Written 02-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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Wow- I am honored to receive such a review zanya
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my pleasure, havva a good day and take care.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Certainly a lot quieter than it used to be these days... ;/ A great offering for this so very limited format contest - thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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Certainly a lot quieter than it used to be these days... ;/ A great offering for this so very limited format contest - thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 02-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from RodG
The other night on the news Chicago's empty streets were shown. You convey this strangeness very well in only 11 syllables. Using S words adds to the ATMOSPHERE you wish to evoke. Rod
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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The other night on the news Chicago's empty streets were shown. You convey this strangeness very well in only 11 syllables. Using S words adds to the ATMOSPHERE you wish to evoke. Rod
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from RShipp
The illustration you have chosen complimented your title and poem perfectly.
Seeing the pictures from the camera of the streets- it is eerie!
Best of luck with the 3-5-3 writing prompt contest.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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The illustration you have chosen complimented your title and poem perfectly.
Seeing the pictures from the camera of the streets- it is eerie!
Best of luck with the 3-5-3 writing prompt contest.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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Yes -strange times we are living in ! zanya
