Pasta Master
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Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
I'm all for pasta and meatballs I love the comical cartoon and I I think it's colorful which adds to the presentation. The words meet the Tri -word guidelines for the contest and the cartoon is accommodating to the words
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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I'm all for pasta and meatballs I love the comical cartoon and I I think it's colorful which adds to the presentation. The words meet the Tri -word guidelines for the contest and the cartoon is accommodating to the words
Comment Written 06-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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Thanks for your review. Much appreciated.
Geoff
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet, I gave you your 4th vote.
Just reading your poem had my mouth watering...I love le lasagne and i cannelloni but my top favorite is la pasta con le polpette.
You mentioned some of the most loved dishes in the world...in my opinion Italian cuisine is the best.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020
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Ciao mystery poet, I gave you your 4th vote.
Just reading your poem had my mouth watering...I love le lasagne and i cannelloni but my top favorite is la pasta con le polpette.
You mentioned some of the most loved dishes in the world...in my opinion Italian cuisine is the best.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your review and, of course, your vote. Both are appreciated .
Comment from Louise Michelle
This was so much fun to read. I loved the image you chose, the white text on red background and, of course, the content. I have only one complaint - now I'm in the mood for spaghetti. Care to come over and cook it for me, haha. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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This was so much fun to read. I loved the image you chose, the white text on red background and, of course, the content. I have only one complaint - now I'm in the mood for spaghetti. Care to come over and cook it for me, haha. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 02-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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Thanks for your review. Even writing this made me hungry lol.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You made me feel hungry here talking of food, although pasta is no something I eat, but it is popular in Italy and all around the world, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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You made me feel hungry here talking of food, although pasta is no something I eat, but it is popular in Italy and all around the world, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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Thanks for your review. Writing this even made me hungry!!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your fun contest entry, Mystery Author. Great job with the style required. Your picture is perfect for your words. Your lines flow at a quick pace--almost like slurping that spaghetti. Good job with the rhymes. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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I enjoyed your fun contest entry, Mystery Author. Great job with the style required. Your picture is perfect for your words. Your lines flow at a quick pace--almost like slurping that spaghetti. Good job with the rhymes. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Thanks for your review. Much appreciated.
Comment from Puzzle
This is cute. It reminds me of the poems we make the kids read in the morning at the school I work with. I like the little cartoon boy you chose to pair with it! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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This is cute. It reminds me of the poems we make the kids read in the morning at the school I work with. I like the little cartoon boy you chose to pair with it! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Thanks for your review. Much appreciated.
Comment from RodG
This contest entry is delightful. The narrator easily could be me at any pasta dinner, especially the way he's described in stanza two. It is obvious you enjoy MANY types. Rod
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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This contest entry is delightful. The narrator easily could be me at any pasta dinner, especially the way he's described in stanza two. It is obvious you enjoy MANY types. Rod
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Thanks for your review. Much appreciated.
Comment from w.j.debi
Yes, pasta is a great comfort food and you can create so many varieties so it never gets old. You make me want to cook some for dinner tonight.
You don't see many contests with word count instead of syllables. Looks like you nailed it. Best of luck
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Yes, pasta is a great comfort food and you can create so many varieties so it never gets old. You make me want to cook some for dinner tonight.
You don't see many contests with word count instead of syllables. Looks like you nailed it. Best of luck
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Thanks for your review. I actually find the word count a lot easier
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about different parts dishes that are always a treat to eat even when it is saucy and messy. Italian food is easy to make and a little bit can be filling enough for a long time.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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A very well-written poem about different parts dishes that are always a treat to eat even when it is saucy and messy. Italian food is easy to make and a little bit can be filling enough for a long time.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Thanks for your review. Much appreciated
