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Comment from P1
again i really like what you are doing here
and i totally get what your message is and you
state and share it well, but i am wondering if
it is more a statement than poetical?? just
my thoughts.
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again i really like what you are doing here
and i totally get what your message is and you
state and share it well, but i am wondering if
it is more a statement than poetical?? just
my thoughts.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
Comment from SPOLIN
I do not understand this poem, but, so what. OK each chapter is independent, so if I read each line independently, each makes sense in one way or another. Agreement is not necessary.
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I do not understand this poem, but, so what. OK each chapter is independent, so if I read each line independently, each makes sense in one way or another. Agreement is not necessary.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
Comment from fairy77
This is interesting point. There are so many terrorist bombing and rallies. This is a great point and a marvellous poem.Well done!beth fairy77.
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This is interesting point. There are so many terrorist bombing and rallies. This is a great point and a marvellous poem.Well done!beth fairy77.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
Comment from Dklrdmcches
I really enjoyed the message that you were portraying throughout this perspective piece. The flow was smooth and you had intensity that made the poem really speak to the reader. The ending fell short from the rest of the piece. Great Job...dklrd
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I really enjoyed the message that you were portraying throughout this perspective piece. The flow was smooth and you had intensity that made the poem really speak to the reader. The ending fell short from the rest of the piece. Great Job...dklrd
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
Comment from Cedar
This is a very thought provoking poem and it asks a very important question. What about our leaders? They have lost control, that's why we're at war all the time.
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This is a very thought provoking poem and it asks a very important question. What about our leaders? They have lost control, that's why we're at war all the time.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
Comment from MelissaBickel
Sometimes there is no teaching of others, others have closed themselves off at the heart. Only the teachable can be reached. It has been like that since the beginning of man.
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Sometimes there is no teaching of others, others have closed themselves off at the heart. Only the teachable can be reached. It has been like that since the beginning of man.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
Comment from Mastery
I Must say, your posting all of these wonderful poems must be costing you a fortune, my friend. I notice they all pay very well. I want to thank you for that. This is another "thinking man's" poem. Well done. Bob
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I Must say, your posting all of these wonderful poems must be costing you a fortune, my friend. I notice they all pay very well. I want to thank you for that. This is another "thinking man's" poem. Well done. Bob
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes my friend indeed what about the leaders where are there morals well done on this write my friend expressing your thoughts and feelings well regards Jill
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Yes my friend indeed what about the leaders where are there morals well done on this write my friend expressing your thoughts and feelings well regards Jill
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
Comment from L. Sherman
What about the leaders? A good question. The answer to which I posit is that there aren't any. Regardless of position or title or supposed authority, I qualify none presently in office (anywhere) as true leaders. None of the qualities are there. Just saying.
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What about the leaders? A good question. The answer to which I posit is that there aren't any. Regardless of position or title or supposed authority, I qualify none presently in office (anywhere) as true leaders. None of the qualities are there. Just saying.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
Comment from MizKat
Alcreator Litt Dear - This is another great poem. You sure are good at getting your point across with few lines and syllables. Very enjoyable. Kat
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Alcreator Litt Dear - This is another great poem. You sure are good at getting your point across with few lines and syllables. Very enjoyable. Kat
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
