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Comment from MikoAmaya
Perhaps this had more meaning to me since I'm military. Either way, I like it. Well done and keep up the good work.
~MikoAmaya
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Perhaps this had more meaning to me since I'm military. Either way, I like it. Well done and keep up the good work.
~MikoAmaya
Comment Written 24-Mar-2013
Comment from gazzagodbod
Morals are so important without them we are mere beasts that wallow in our own importance well done my friend gazzagodbod
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Morals are so important without them we are mere beasts that wallow in our own importance well done my friend gazzagodbod
Comment Written 24-Mar-2013
Comment from Pierre Francis
Your brief poem raises many issues, but I cannot see how these can be tackled in the tight constraints you've set for the verse. If morals is the subject of the poem, it would (in my opinion) be useful to make just one powerful, all-encompassing statement about it, without getting into too many areas, like ethics, leadership, race issues and so on.
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Your brief poem raises many issues, but I cannot see how these can be tackled in the tight constraints you've set for the verse. If morals is the subject of the poem, it would (in my opinion) be useful to make just one powerful, all-encompassing statement about it, without getting into too many areas, like ethics, leadership, race issues and so on.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2013
Comment from mshugh
I think I get the first four lines - nut I am not sure I get the last line - now you really have my little old mind going ninety knots
Well done
Michael
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I think I get the first four lines - nut I am not sure I get the last line - now you really have my little old mind going ninety knots
Well done
Michael
Comment Written 24-Mar-2013
Comment from OLA THOMAS
Well, the leaders too need to be taught. Losing a nation is a terrible blunder and I see it as the worst lost any one could incure.
ola thomas
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Well, the leaders too need to be taught. Losing a nation is a terrible blunder and I see it as the worst lost any one could incure.
ola thomas
Comment Written 24-Mar-2013
Comment from Glasstruth
I don't get it. When you lose something you learn morality, yet whrn other humnans such politicians lose something they don't learn anything. They yield to terrorits? Your Philosophy... well, it's different. Les
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I don't get it. When you lose something you learn morality, yet whrn other humnans such politicians lose something they don't learn anything. They yield to terrorits? Your Philosophy... well, it's different. Les
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
Comment from dannyleonn
Dang! How thought provoking - I mean lay it on the line.
You never cease to wow me with your insight. Now I want to fall asleep with this image...but I'll manage.
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Dang! How thought provoking - I mean lay it on the line.
You never cease to wow me with your insight. Now I want to fall asleep with this image...but I'll manage.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
Comment from Bindu Saxena
Background
The Book of Poetry on True Experiences of Life in Living contains poems in different structures. It discovers experiences, experimental and observatory feelings of life in diverse courses in dimension
The author gave a fact of life, which not only his observation by it is the observation of all country men about the ones who lead the country. It's true and saddening. Good small poem that conveys much.
When I lose something,
You teach me ethics, morals,
What about leaders?
Lose our nation, race, country,
Yield to foreign terrorists!
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Background
The Book of Poetry on True Experiences of Life in Living contains poems in different structures. It discovers experiences, experimental and observatory feelings of life in diverse courses in dimension
The author gave a fact of life, which not only his observation by it is the observation of all country men about the ones who lead the country. It's true and saddening. Good small poem that conveys much.
When I lose something,
You teach me ethics, morals,
What about leaders?
Lose our nation, race, country,
Yield to foreign terrorists!
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
Comment from Frank Atwood
Very deep and to the point. All aspects of life, good and bad, create all we see around us connected to emotions and desires. Where one's heart is shows where that person lives. One is either one with the madness or of the other as the meek and mellow become hated by those who are one and believe they have bragging right to know what is best for all. God bless and keep up the great works.
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Very deep and to the point. All aspects of life, good and bad, create all we see around us connected to emotions and desires. Where one's heart is shows where that person lives. One is either one with the madness or of the other as the meek and mellow become hated by those who are one and believe they have bragging right to know what is best for all. God bless and keep up the great works.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
You seem to have the wonderful ability to say so much in so few words. The truth in this post is vividly portrayed. The message is frighteningly all to clear. Good job, Carolyn
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You seem to have the wonderful ability to say so much in so few words. The truth in this post is vividly portrayed. The message is frighteningly all to clear. Good job, Carolyn
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
