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Comment from steevie
When our leaders lose morals, they lose the same as us, but only on a larger scale that the average man. That is the only difference.
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When our leaders lose morals, they lose the same as us, but only on a larger scale that the average man. That is the only difference.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
Comment from Galactia
Great 5'7'5'7'7, perfect syllable count across all lines, strong voice of sharring your points of views.
Well done
Regards
Tia
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Great 5'7'5'7'7, perfect syllable count across all lines, strong voice of sharring your points of views.
Well done
Regards
Tia
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
Comment from kashmayank
well said nand correctly said everyone should be treatred equally and leaders should be made accountable nice work all the best
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well said nand correctly said everyone should be treatred equally and leaders should be made accountable nice work all the best
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
Comment from Black_Oxygen
With very few words, this poetry speaks a powerful
truth. The use of user friendly language makes it
easy to comprehend. Thank You for your creation.
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With very few words, this poetry speaks a powerful
truth. The use of user friendly language makes it
easy to comprehend. Thank You for your creation.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
Comment from amahra
I starting to like this style, though I would never try it myself. Still it seems quite affective for expressing poetry. Good job.
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I starting to like this style, though I would never try it myself. Still it seems quite affective for expressing poetry. Good job.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
Comment from Walu Feral
Great work my friend! You tell a very true and strong message in this well written and constructed little piece. Well done and cheers, Fez.
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Great work my friend! You tell a very true and strong message in this well written and constructed little piece. Well done and cheers, Fez.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
You raised some very pertinent points in this poem. Sometimes in an endeavour to observe human rights we overlook the rights of those nearest to us. Giddy
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You raised some very pertinent points in this poem. Sometimes in an endeavour to observe human rights we overlook the rights of those nearest to us. Giddy
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
Comment from mtrybak
Thank God for you and your courage to take a side! Most people are so concerned with their reputations that they are afraid to speak the truth! The message was timely, the delivery impeccable and the authenticity perfect. Thank you for sharing.
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Thank God for you and your courage to take a side! Most people are so concerned with their reputations that they are afraid to speak the truth! The message was timely, the delivery impeccable and the authenticity perfect. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2013
Comment from visionary1234
ok Al - I'm not exactly understanding the link here ... why are you blaming leaders for foreign terrorism? especially Obama? or is this a buildup of past history of American foreign policy?
:)Sharyn
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ok Al - I'm not exactly understanding the link here ... why are you blaming leaders for foreign terrorism? especially Obama? or is this a buildup of past history of American foreign policy?
:)Sharyn
Comment Written 22-Mar-2013
Comment from EMB
This one has me pondering a lot of things, but none of them are too coherent. I'm a bit puzzled, actually. The first half seems somewhat inspirational, but the second part leaves me miffed with the final line. Alas, this was a bit beyond me. :)
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This one has me pondering a lot of things, but none of them are too coherent. I'm a bit puzzled, actually. The first half seems somewhat inspirational, but the second part leaves me miffed with the final line. Alas, this was a bit beyond me. :)
Comment Written 22-Mar-2013
