Her Surprise
80 Words Surprise Story Contest4 total reviews
Comment from RShipp
Wow! Now that would have been a surprise!
You picked a great topic for your surprise and placed your characters in a powerful place.
I enjoyed the read.
Best of luck in the 80 Words Surprise Story Contest.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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Wow! Now that would have been a surprise!
You picked a great topic for your surprise and placed your characters in a powerful place.
I enjoyed the read.
Best of luck in the 80 Words Surprise Story Contest.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review and generous stars, RS. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a great weekend.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
Excellent! What a horrile descent from the plane his wife is going to have -plenty of time to ruminate on the horrors of the end of her life before the event actually occurs.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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Excellent! What a horrile descent from the plane his wife is going to have -plenty of time to ruminate on the horrors of the end of her life before the event actually occurs.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the great review, Katherine. I really appreciate the generous the generous stars. Have a wonderful weekend.
Comment from MARIANNE GI
Ha ha oh my God! I think she will rethink it next time! But if I were in your hero's place, I would have pushed my friend out! That was really funny congratulations. It gives us ideas!!
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Ha ha oh my God! I think she will rethink it next time! But if I were in your hero's place, I would have pushed my friend out! That was really funny congratulations. It gives us ideas!!
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Hey, Marianne, hello. Thank you for the fantastic review and generous stars. Yeah, I couldn't think of a scenario to get him up there, plus, I didn't have enough words in the contest to play with to get him there with them. Lol. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a great day.
Comment from Debbie Pope
This one brought a chuckle. It wasn't a laugh. It was a sound that my body automatically made in response to your ending. It guess that you could say that you got a good reaction from me. It was a cross between an "oh, no" and "that's so clever."
I liked it a lot. You had me thinking about the romantic parachute jump until the very end.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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This one brought a chuckle. It wasn't a laugh. It was a sound that my body automatically made in response to your ending. It guess that you could say that you got a good reaction from me. It was a cross between an "oh, no" and "that's so clever."
I liked it a lot. You had me thinking about the romantic parachute jump until the very end.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Debbie. I'm glad you got a little chuckle out of it. Lol. Have a great night.
