Comment from Tanvi Pauddar

Exceptional

I liked your poem for many reasons. One, your word choice is a-mazing! Two, the rhymes are perfect, and three, when I read the bolded words, it's like a sentence. Good luck in the contest!!!

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020

Thank you so much for reading and for the awesome review!! Yes, the highlighted sentences form their own poem. This is called a Constanza. I have the format listed below. :-) Thanks again! So happy you enjoyed and 6 stars??? Awwww :-)

reply by Tanvi Pauddar on 31-Mar-2020

Oh, I didn't know that. I'm only a fifth grader, so I don't have much experience. Once again, good luck in the contest!!

reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020

5th grade! :-) Well happy writing! Thanks again.

reply by Tanvi Pauddar on 01-Apr-2020

You're welcome

Comment from Puzzle

Excellent

I'm learning so much about poetry being on this site. I'm grateful you posted the authors notes. I will definitely try to write a poem in this style. I really enjoyed this. I love your layout too. Nice work

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 Comment Written 31-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020

Well thank you so much!!! pm me if you try this form..I would love to read. :-) Thanks agian for reading and the review.