Sunrise Miracles
Constanza22 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Constanza
Sunrise Miracles
by Susanjohn
Hello, Susan,
A beautiful constanza poem about nature. I love the presentation. I like this poetic form, I never saw it before. Well done.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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Constanza
Sunrise Miracles
by Susanjohn
Hello, Susan,
A beautiful constanza poem about nature. I love the presentation. I like this poetic form, I never saw it before. Well done.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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Thank you kindly! :-)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a beautiful constanza, Susan. Great job with its style. Your words are well-chosen and create great imagery. Your theme is well-expressed. You are right about the inspiration that nature provides. Thanks for sharing. Stay safe. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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This is a beautiful constanza, Susan. Great job with its style. Your words are well-chosen and create great imagery. Your theme is well-expressed. You are right about the inspiration that nature provides. Thanks for sharing. Stay safe. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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Hi Jan, Thank you so much for reading! Ill try and get over to your page soon! :-)
Comment from June Sargent
What an uplifting piece written in a format that could easily feel stunted and contrived. But this flowed beautifully and naturally. And you took us on a journey that we so much need in these days of forced isolation! I love contanzas and you did well with it.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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What an uplifting piece written in a format that could easily feel stunted and contrived. But this flowed beautifully and naturally. And you took us on a journey that we so much need in these days of forced isolation! I love contanzas and you did well with it.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Thank you June for this smile-making review this morning! It is appreciated. :-)))) and six stars??? awwww
Comment from Gloria ....
And what a beautiful form is this Constanza. I love it.
With each of the first lines of each tercet rhyming weaves together the entire verse with each couplet rhyming to itself with serene imagery throughout.
This is a terrific entry into the rhyming contest, Susan.
Wishing you much luck with the Contest Committee.
Gloria
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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And what a beautiful form is this Constanza. I love it.
With each of the first lines of each tercet rhyming weaves together the entire verse with each couplet rhyming to itself with serene imagery throughout.
This is a terrific entry into the rhyming contest, Susan.
Wishing you much luck with the Contest Committee.
Gloria
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Hi Gloria, I am always so happy to see a review from you! Thank you so much!
Comment from Sally Law
This is gorgeous and every line a poem in itself. Yet, it comes together and tells the full story of God and His creation. A beautiful offering, dear Susan, from a beautiful soul. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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This is gorgeous and every line a poem in itself. Yet, it comes together and tells the full story of God and His creation. A beautiful offering, dear Susan, from a beautiful soul. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Hi Sally! Thank you for such kind words... I do so appreciate it! Hope all is well with you :-)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This poem is a delightful read, uplifting and well written, good rhymes and flow and a pleasure, you paint a beautiful picture with words and this deserves a six and I only have one left and it's yours Susan, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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This poem is a delightful read, uplifting and well written, good rhymes and flow and a pleasure, you paint a beautiful picture with words and this deserves a six and I only have one left and it's yours Susan, love Dolly x
Comment Written 31-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Dolly! thank you so much...and a sixth star? Awwww hugs you.
Comment from Kit draken
God has nothing to do with this.
He has nothing to do with this at all.
God has nothing to do with your love.
He has no care about what concerns you and your life.
God does nought care for the little things.
Like how you appreciate the wildlife
God does hate comparing your love to the life around you
He doesn't care for it one bit
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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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God has nothing to do with this.
He has nothing to do with this at all.
God has nothing to do with your love.
He has no care about what concerns you and your life.
God does nought care for the little things.
Like how you appreciate the wildlife
God does hate comparing your love to the life around you
He doesn't care for it one bit
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Kit, you must be new here at Fantstory. Please review the guidelines for a proper and constructive review. I see you have granted me two stars based on your opinion. We will just set that aside for the moment. I have been through many trials in my life, starting in childhood. I know pain when I "read" it. There is anger in your words and I am truly sorry for that. I understand anger always comes from a place of deep hurt. I will not engage in a conversation in regards to religion. My beliefs are my own, and I chose to live out my faith rather than preach. My poem was not meant to be offensive to anyone. Remember, you have the choice not to review if you just don't care about the subject matter. I'll admit, it wasn't a very good feeling reading your review this morning. This is a complicated form that required a lot of work and I am proud of it. But, I will get over it. Kit, clearly there is more going on here with you. like I said...I know pain. If you need a non-judgemental friend to talk to...reach out via pm. I hope you read this with an open mind and consider all I have said. Stay safe out there and I truly hope you have many many reasons to smile today. :-)
Comment from Kellie Scranton
Loved your choice of words, how descriptive they are & how the poem
flows. My favorite verse is the kaleidoscope decked wonderland, I think think is an excellent poem for the constanza contest Xo-kellie
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Loved your choice of words, how descriptive they are & how the poem
flows. My favorite verse is the kaleidoscope decked wonderland, I think think is an excellent poem for the constanza contest Xo-kellie
Comment Written 31-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Thank you very much... glad you enjoyed.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Elegant in presentation with astounding imagery and masterful alliteration. Refreshing--"visually delicious" just popped into mind; got to use that one again. Flawless rhythm and rhyme. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Elegant in presentation with astounding imagery and masterful alliteration. Refreshing--"visually delicious" just popped into mind; got to use that one again. Flawless rhythm and rhyme. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 31-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Thank you Liz for such a sweet review!! :-)
Comment from WalkerMan
You picked the perfect form and illustration for this absolute delight. Your words are every bit as vivid as the colors in that image. Your Constanza is masterfully crafted and reads well in both ways. I really like this form, which I have never seen before. You are so good at finding and effectively using lesser-known forms in beautiful ways. The second stanza is my favorite, but I really just love it all. Superb.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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You picked the perfect form and illustration for this absolute delight. Your words are every bit as vivid as the colors in that image. Your Constanza is masterfully crafted and reads well in both ways. I really like this form, which I have never seen before. You are so good at finding and effectively using lesser-known forms in beautiful ways. The second stanza is my favorite, but I really just love it all. Superb.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Aw Mike! I can almost see you smiling! I am so happy you enjoyed this Constanza... AND you picked up on the poem within a poem... Thanks again Mike for another thoughtful review! Much appreciated along with the six shiny stars!
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You are most welcome, Susan. You are on a tear with these posts! All that pent-up creative energy you had to store away when you were too busy working has become a gorgeous waterfall of lovely posts.
I think this one is among your very best. :)) -- Mike
