Sunrise Miracles
Constanza22 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
Congratulations on having your poem so well received in the contest. What spectacular picture you selected to accent your Constanza. I appreciated your use of the bold typeface to intensify the form and I enjoyed your rhymes. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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Congratulations on having your poem so well received in the contest. What spectacular picture you selected to accent your Constanza. I appreciated your use of the bold typeface to intensify the form and I enjoyed your rhymes. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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Hi Joan, thanks for reading and for the great review. I really like that image too :-)
Comment from dragonpoet
The first lines could be a love poem inviting a person to join the speaker in life and the love of nature. The couplets expand on the beauty and awesome inspiration nature is. The artwork illustrates the words well. It seems the poem could be ekphrastic, inspired by the pictrure.
Congratulations on placing third in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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The first lines could be a love poem inviting a person to join the speaker in life and the love of nature. The couplets expand on the beauty and awesome inspiration nature is. The artwork illustrates the words well. It seems the poem could be ekphrastic, inspired by the pictrure.
Congratulations on placing third in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dragonpoet
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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Well thank you very much!
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You are most kindly welcome.
dp
Comment from RShipp
I love your 'double-the-poem' skill you have used in this fabulous writing.
And you have illustrated - in print- the double poem perfectly!
Best of luck in the "Rhyming Poem" contest.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020
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I love your 'double-the-poem' skill you have used in this fabulous writing.
And you have illustrated - in print- the double poem perfectly!
Best of luck in the "Rhyming Poem" contest.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020
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Thank you for sure a great review!! I so appreciate it :-))) Awww 6 stars? thank you again.
Comment from Minglement
You have introduced me to a new poem form and I love it. How beautifully you've made it work inspires me to try one myself. Though I can't imagine doing it this well. Great presentation. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020
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You have introduced me to a new poem form and I love it. How beautifully you've made it work inspires me to try one myself. Though I can't imagine doing it this well. Great presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020
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Well, thank you very much!! I hope you give it a try :-)
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My pleasure :) Take care.
Comment from royowen
Well done, I wrote my first one of these ladrbweek I think. This is superb Susan, so smooth, so articulate, a work of art my friend, it was a near perfect form, I'm sure this was as good a poem as one can get. The rhyming was perfect wth the first line all matching, and most creative second and third line rhyming, well done, good luck, a winner I think, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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Well done, I wrote my first one of these ladrbweek I think. This is superb Susan, so smooth, so articulate, a work of art my friend, it was a near perfect form, I'm sure this was as good a poem as one can get. The rhyming was perfect wth the first line all matching, and most creative second and third line rhyming, well done, good luck, a winner I think, blessings Roy
Comment Written 02-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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Hi Roy, thank you for such a great review! I so appreciate it. It was a bit of a challenge. :-)
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Well done
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Constanza poem about the hand in hand walk through the colorful Spring garden at sunrise and appreciate the beauty that God planned so perfectly.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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A very well-written Constanza poem about the hand in hand walk through the colorful Spring garden at sunrise and appreciate the beauty that God planned so perfectly.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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Hi Sandra, thank you for reading!!
Comment from Richard J
Ahhh, Dear Susan,
First-off, the sheer wonderment in vivid imagery you've created virtually dances all over the page, up and off into our minds, hearts, and souls ... this is far more than a simple poem, Susan; it's Nature, Itself, epitomized in a most enthralling poetic form, and you've done it to a tee.
The Constanza, I've enjoyed composing in many times; it is my great pleasure to pass it along to you, and what a perfect fit for your creative heart and pen. This is one I wish I'd done, or even could have done.
You've hit all the points of an eloquently rendered literary piece in grammar, poetic voice, and the pure release of sheer spirituality in every way the mind, heart, mind's-eye, and soul could possibly feel and embrace a poetic work of art.
And, speaking of art, that glorious picture, font, color choice, and layout make for a sheer eye-candy presentation.
Who knows what the voters will see(?), but this should take a proud spot in the contest, and to me, that's a given.
In my highest discernment, the title "Master Poetess" is well within your reach, and this amazingly laid piece proves it in a way nothing else could.
Brilliant work, Dear Lady-Poet, and I thank you sincerely for the most wonderful treat! ~ Richard : )
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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Ahhh, Dear Susan,
First-off, the sheer wonderment in vivid imagery you've created virtually dances all over the page, up and off into our minds, hearts, and souls ... this is far more than a simple poem, Susan; it's Nature, Itself, epitomized in a most enthralling poetic form, and you've done it to a tee.
The Constanza, I've enjoyed composing in many times; it is my great pleasure to pass it along to you, and what a perfect fit for your creative heart and pen. This is one I wish I'd done, or even could have done.
You've hit all the points of an eloquently rendered literary piece in grammar, poetic voice, and the pure release of sheer spirituality in every way the mind, heart, mind's-eye, and soul could possibly feel and embrace a poetic work of art.
And, speaking of art, that glorious picture, font, color choice, and layout make for a sheer eye-candy presentation.
Who knows what the voters will see(?), but this should take a proud spot in the contest, and to me, that's a given.
In my highest discernment, the title "Master Poetess" is well within your reach, and this amazingly laid piece proves it in a way nothing else could.
Brilliant work, Dear Lady-Poet, and I thank you sincerely for the most wonderful treat! ~ Richard : )
Comment Written 02-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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Mastess poetress??? naww...I dont know about that. But I do appreciate you teaching me this form. Thank you so much for the encouragment..this was a bit of a challenge. and six stars??? :-))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
Aw, Susan,
You deserve all the plaudits and honors you can gather.
The pleasure is was warmly mine. ~ RJ : )
Comment from Irish Rain
How beautiful this is!
Surely the winner!
Not only is the picture magical,
the words invite us to walk and
ponder this lovely place.
Such a treat in these times!!
Stay well,
blessings...
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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How beautiful this is!
Surely the winner!
Not only is the picture magical,
the words invite us to walk and
ponder this lovely place.
Such a treat in these times!!
Stay well,
blessings...
Comment Written 02-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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Awww thank you for such a lovely review! :-)
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Have a great Thursday!!
Comment from lance michaels
Very fresh and vivid description of one of God's greatest gifts to us... nature. A perfect poem for Spring and all it's beauty. I was enchanted with this wonderful piece of writing!
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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Very fresh and vivid description of one of God's greatest gifts to us... nature. A perfect poem for Spring and all it's beauty. I was enchanted with this wonderful piece of writing!
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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Well thank you Lance! I appreciate the kind words. :-)
Comment from harmony13
The author's words were uplifting, beautiful and creative. I enjoy the
read of this poem. As I read this poem, I found it to be joyous,
uplifting and filled with meaning. The artwork is perfect and compliments
this poem well. May you be well and safe.....
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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The author's words were uplifting, beautiful and creative. I enjoy the
read of this poem. As I read this poem, I found it to be joyous,
uplifting and filled with meaning. The artwork is perfect and compliments
this poem well. May you be well and safe.....
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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Hi Harmony! Thank you for this review! I appreciate you taking the time to read and share your thoughts :-)
