Oh Life!
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Comment from Gungalo
given,
whate'er I ask,
differently, I know,
my Science Math thought goes wrong, as
unexplained power 'yond mort' offers per
natural, unknown, mystic ord,
an unseen eye, keeps track
my needs, ask not,
given.
A bit unorthodox here but never the less a great attempt at the style.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
given,
whate'er I ask,
differently, I know,
my Science Math thought goes wrong, as
unexplained power 'yond mort' offers per
natural, unknown, mystic ord,
an unseen eye, keeps track
my needs, ask not,
given.
A bit unorthodox here but never the less a great attempt at the style.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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thanks for certified review
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Comment from muezza56
i enjoyed this very well written poem and the play with dialectual usage of words. well conceived and well constructed poem
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
i enjoyed this very well written poem and the play with dialectual usage of words. well conceived and well constructed poem
Comment Written 07-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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thanks for nice review
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
A well written rictameter aided by some poetic licence. I like the hidden meaning of the true friendship- deep personal feelings. Giddy
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
A well written rictameter aided by some poetic licence. I like the hidden meaning of the true friendship- deep personal feelings. Giddy
Comment Written 07-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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thanks for the review
Comment from emjaihammond
Another lovely thoughtful poetic message. I had to read it twice, I admit, but I come away with a message that says God is all knowing, and can care for us much better than natural thought will allow. If that makes sense to you. I must say I am not sure, but love the way words make us think.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
Another lovely thoughtful poetic message. I had to read it twice, I admit, but I come away with a message that says God is all knowing, and can care for us much better than natural thought will allow. If that makes sense to you. I must say I am not sure, but love the way words make us think.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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thanks for review with doubts
Comment from Anthony Crosbie
You have a unique style which can be seen as difficult or interesting depending on your mindset, I think you're saying that God is always watching and knows best, but I can't be sure. :)
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
You have a unique style which can be seen as difficult or interesting depending on your mindset, I think you're saying that God is always watching and knows best, but I can't be sure. :)
Comment Written 07-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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thanks for review with suspicion
Comment from jmdg1954
I reads this twice, then went to look at other reviews for done help, got none, went back , reads'em few mo times, still ain't got nothin.,,
I keep try in' ...
They absolutely no sense, sorry, John
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
I reads this twice, then went to look at other reviews for done help, got none, went back , reads'em few mo times, still ain't got nothin.,,
I keep try in' ...
They absolutely no sense, sorry, John
Comment Written 07-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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thanks for trying
Comment from Tacticz
I love it. It instantly gives off that philosophical vibe that not many people can grasp. Only a true poet can write these words and deliver them to the reader perfectly.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
I love it. It instantly gives off that philosophical vibe that not many people can grasp. Only a true poet can write these words and deliver them to the reader perfectly.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2013
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thanks for honest and fair review with complements
Comment from TiffanyLeeBaldwin
This is a new type of poem for me to read. I like the form. You did a great job putting this together and the key really helped. Good Job, I look forward to reading more.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
This is a new type of poem for me to read. I like the form. You did a great job putting this together and the key really helped. Good Job, I look forward to reading more.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2013
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thanks for excellent review
Comment from Deniz22
Wow! another brain twister for my professional eyes; what shall we make of this hodge-podge of scrambled thoughts? Perhaps that your great brain, however useful in many venues, yet cannot meet inner needs or perhaps, even ordinary ones, so you must rely on God who blesses you without even being asked. Wonder what would happen if you prayed?
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
Wow! another brain twister for my professional eyes; what shall we make of this hodge-podge of scrambled thoughts? Perhaps that your great brain, however useful in many venues, yet cannot meet inner needs or perhaps, even ordinary ones, so you must rely on God who blesses you without even being asked. Wonder what would happen if you prayed?
Comment Written 07-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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thanks for guesswork
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I did my best with what you gave. Obscurity are you. :)
Comment from Ceallach
Ahh, I see the essence of this poem - me thinks well done yet again. Isn't a wonder when what we learn about life through schooling ends up to not add up to what our spirits view as true? Well done sir, very well done. C~
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
Ahh, I see the essence of this poem - me thinks well done yet again. Isn't a wonder when what we learn about life through schooling ends up to not add up to what our spirits view as true? Well done sir, very well done. C~
Comment Written 07-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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thanks for honest review