Comment from Norbanus

Excellent

Inside the darkness brought to us by mort
The science math and learning goes for naught
the unexplained grabs our unseeing eye,
and turns our needs to dust beyond our voice

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2013

Comment from amahra

Good

you lost me again. The words just don't seem to go together for some reason. I did like the art work, however, and thought it was very appropriate.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013

THANKS.

Comment from mizzkris20

Excellent

I pondered on this one a while, lol. It took me a minute or two to fully get the meaning but I think I do. Your poem is very different and I like that

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2013

Comment from CR Delport

Excellent

In this life of ours there is so many things that happen that we cant explain. You captured it beautifully and wrote it well in our own voice.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013

thanks for nice review

Comment from marijmd

Excellent

Why capitalize Science and Math - does this hold a different meaning or show more import since you have? Just curious to understand your thought process.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013

thanks for quest review
same meaning as we all know

Comment from GarthL

Excellent

Seems to cover criteria nicely with some unusual word usages. Well conceived and conveyed and more power to He that provides all our needs and beyond. Your faith is obviously very strong. Well done, StayStrong, Garth

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013

thanks for nice review
appreciated

Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

God is even more powerful than math and science. Nice poem. Good format followed. It works out well. The photograph is surreal and tropical. Good.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013

thanks for insightful review

reply by sunnilicious on 08-Apr-2013

You're always welcome. Have a good week.

Comment from poetic1988

Excellent

nice flow poem, I like the rhyme and rhythm
your poem has s well. from reading this piece I gather it is about being spoiled and thinking one can always get what they want and nothing can go wrong until one day it does and left unsure of what to do and after some time learning life lessons

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013

thanks for philosophical review

Comment from seewhatimwritingnow

Excellent

I think it is wonderful that God has picked you as his special one and fulfills all your needs, without asking. It must be because you are so close to Him and do His work as expected. Great write! Thanks for sharing, my friend. Betty

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013

thanks for ironic and metaphorical professional review

Comment from LaDonnaCole

Excellent

Interesting license with the language.

I think this poem is saying that reason isn't the way to find Providence. The evidence is in the meeting of basic needs.

Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013

thanks for reviewing with guess