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9 total reviews
Comment from Makahla J
I love the visual you used to further convey your message. Isn't it something, raw emotion can bring us some of our most vulnerable work. Thank you for sharing your perspective with us!
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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I love the visual you used to further convey your message. Isn't it something, raw emotion can bring us some of our most vulnerable work. Thank you for sharing your perspective with us!
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Dear M. Jackson, Thank you for your compliment and review. Dove
Comment from L.L.M
Hello Dovemarie
A very creative and inspiring quatrain poem you wrote. Greatly descriptive. Especially in the sounds. Very well written and great poetry entry. Well done and best of luck. Lourens
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Hello Dovemarie
A very creative and inspiring quatrain poem you wrote. Greatly descriptive. Especially in the sounds. Very well written and great poetry entry. Well done and best of luck. Lourens
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Dear L.L.M Thank you for your compliments and review. Dove
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is an interesting short piece with a working rhyme scheme. In it you discuss the effects of thunder on the emotions. The picture is a fitting complement. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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This is an interesting short piece with a working rhyme scheme. In it you discuss the effects of thunder on the emotions. The picture is a fitting complement. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Dear Susan, Thank you for your compliments and review. Dove
Comment from Cindy Decker
I like your poem very much. The crashing thunder/-contrasting with your being meek and humble. I can almost hear, from many storms past, the 'low ominous rumble.' Good luck in the contest.
Ps I like the poem very much, but if I were to change anything, maybe a stronger more powerful word for 'crackled.' In any event, very good work.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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I like your poem very much. The crashing thunder/-contrasting with your being meek and humble. I can almost hear, from many storms past, the 'low ominous rumble.' Good luck in the contest.
Ps I like the poem very much, but if I were to change anything, maybe a stronger more powerful word for 'crackled.' In any event, very good work.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Dear Cindy thank you for your compliments and review I will keep in mind about changing the word "crackled."
Comment from Y. M. Roger
When those Spring storms roll through, they certainly catch us 'unawares' and send the heart and mind to wondering!! ;) Love your heart's (and your pen's!) interpretation, Dove! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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When those Spring storms roll through, they certainly catch us 'unawares' and send the heart and mind to wondering!! ;) Love your heart's (and your pen's!) interpretation, Dove! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 05-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Dear Yvette, Thank you for your compliments and review. Dove
Comment from Ogden
Yes, it should. You and all of us are powerless before Him. Meek is your own thing.
We'll soon be in His hurricane season. Let's hope you're not still on His list.
:o)
Ogden (Don)
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020
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Yes, it should. You and all of us are powerless before Him. Meek is your own thing.
We'll soon be in His hurricane season. Let's hope you're not still on His list.
:o)
Ogden (Don)
Comment Written 05-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020
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Dear Don, Thank you for your review and comments. Dove
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You/re very welcome, Dove.
Don
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I must admit that the thunder and lightening when it strikes sounds like the world is coming to an end and it is quite frightening and you brought the thunder storm in your words here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020
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I must admit that the thunder and lightening when it strikes sounds like the world is coming to an end and it is quite frightening and you brought the thunder storm in your words here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020
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Dear Dolly, Thanks for your review, glad you enjoyed the poem. Love, Donna x
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all of your words in this vividly descriptive
poem about nature and how God uses His creation to please us AND to
get our attention.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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You have made excellent use of all of your words in this vividly descriptive
poem about nature and how God uses His creation to please us AND to
get our attention.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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Dear Janice, Thanks for review and compliment. Dove
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your poem, Dove, is well-written. Your words flow smoothly with good rhymes and great imagery. I like the last line about God's power and how it makes you feel. The image is a great pairing. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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Your poem, Dove, is well-written. Your words flow smoothly with good rhymes and great imagery. I like the last line about God's power and how it makes you feel. The image is a great pairing. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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Dear Jan, Thank yu for review and compliments. Dove