The Corona saga
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "The Good "to keep my sanity in time of pandemic
9 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I have to catch up on each of your stories. So number 14 it will be today; I have a few to read since I left off....The increase of the corona is decreasing in some areas and increasing in others? Where are you in the numbers?
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I have to catch up on each of your stories. So number 14 it will be today; I have a few to read since I left off....The increase of the corona is decreasing in some areas and increasing in others? Where are you in the numbers?
Comment Written 23-Jun-2020
Comment from Spitfire
I'm glad this post is longer than the bad. I agree this virus does have a purpose and is bringing people all over together. Thanks for the many examples.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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I'm glad this post is longer than the bad. I agree this virus does have a purpose and is bringing people all over together. Thanks for the many examples.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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You are welcome and thank you so much for reading.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your journal entry is interesting. I liked reading about the way people are acting in other countries around the world. I'm not sure is you saying this is 'good' is sarcastic or true. Personally, I believe I could not give it that high rating. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Your journal entry is interesting. I liked reading about the way people are acting in other countries around the world. I'm not sure is you saying this is 'good' is sarcastic or true. Personally, I believe I could not give it that high rating. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much Jan thank you for your review and your continue support with this saga.
Comment from estory
I thought it was great to see how the virus is actually bringing out the best or better, in all of us. Amazing that it takes something like this to make this happen, and I have to wonder how long it will last. probably only as long as we have to deal with this situation. But it is nice to hear about how people are trying to help each other out to get through this. In the supermarkets, we are doing our best to keep food available for everybody. Our store is in pretty good shape, except for paper goods. This is an interesting series on the virus and I hope you keep it up. An upbeat chapter is great once in a while! Nice irony in that bit about global warming killing off the virus. estory
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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I thought it was great to see how the virus is actually bringing out the best or better, in all of us. Amazing that it takes something like this to make this happen, and I have to wonder how long it will last. probably only as long as we have to deal with this situation. But it is nice to hear about how people are trying to help each other out to get through this. In the supermarkets, we are doing our best to keep food available for everybody. Our store is in pretty good shape, except for paper goods. This is an interesting series on the virus and I hope you keep it up. An upbeat chapter is great once in a while! Nice irony in that bit about global warming killing off the virus. estory
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for your continuous support with this saga.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Absolutely superb! Folks definitely should look on the bright side of hardships and tragedies. Your list should turn everyone's thinking positive. Thank you for thinking up and writing this chapter.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Absolutely superb! Folks definitely should look on the bright side of hardships and tragedies. Your list should turn everyone's thinking positive. Thank you for thinking up and writing this chapter.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much Rebeca for your continuous support with this saga.
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Your writing is very good.
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Thank you so much my friend, you have no idea how much it means to me.
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You are quite welcome.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
Hello Iza,
This is excellent overall. Just some grammar problems (see below - I didn't do them all, just the 'annoying' ones), and the fact that I think the storyline would be better if you started with "Today we are going to talk about the good things that Lady C. brought into our lives. Please don't give me that look; I know Corona is bad for your health, but take into consideration the following:" (as it stands you write "another good thing... " before this...)
These are just boring mechanics, but sometimes you ask for help. Keep posting, even if you're not doing contests at the moment, we love your unique voice.
Katherine
grammar:
good for the this industry > good for the industry
Italia > Italy
this si the best therapy > this is the best therapy
these kittens where born in Edmonton last September > these kittens were born in Edmonton last September
inNovemeber > in November
epidemy > epidemic
globally > mostly "world-wide" or "overall" is better
who find the cure > who finds the cure
as I watching the water running > as I watched the water running
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Hello Iza,
This is excellent overall. Just some grammar problems (see below - I didn't do them all, just the 'annoying' ones), and the fact that I think the storyline would be better if you started with "Today we are going to talk about the good things that Lady C. brought into our lives. Please don't give me that look; I know Corona is bad for your health, but take into consideration the following:" (as it stands you write "another good thing... " before this...)
These are just boring mechanics, but sometimes you ask for help. Keep posting, even if you're not doing contests at the moment, we love your unique voice.
Katherine
grammar:
good for the this industry > good for the industry
Italia > Italy
this si the best therapy > this is the best therapy
these kittens where born in Edmonton last September > these kittens were born in Edmonton last September
inNovemeber > in November
epidemy > epidemic
globally > mostly "world-wide" or "overall" is better
who find the cure > who finds the cure
as I watching the water running > as I watched the water running
Comment Written 29-Mar-2020
Comment from patcelaw
I can understand the shortage of food products in the stores because of people staying ho,e and cooling instead of going out to eat, but I fail to see the need to hoard TP. May your week be blessed.
Patricia
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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I can understand the shortage of food products in the stores because of people staying ho,e and cooling instead of going out to eat, but I fail to see the need to hoard TP. May your week be blessed.
Patricia
Comment Written 29-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for reading. Ms. Patricia please stay safe.
Comment from lyenochka
Wonderful post! It should have been in the Silver Linings contest (I don't know if it's still going on.) Thanks for sharing the GOOD that is happening in response to this terrible pandemic! I like your international focus!
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Wonderful post! It should have been in the Silver Linings contest (I don't know if it's still going on.) Thanks for sharing the GOOD that is happening in response to this terrible pandemic! I like your international focus!
Comment Written 29-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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I am a coward and decided not to waste money in contests anymore that I don't even get a vote. So I'm just focusing on one thing, this book
Thank you so much for reading and for your wonderful support.
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We've all been there in terms of contests! Don't feel bad. Keep up the good humorous writing! ♥
Comment from royowen
I don't think the heat will kill the virus, the human body is pretty warm, Yeh, yes, things like Skype, or FaceTime keeps in touch with FaceTime, well done, stopping thinking too much, your mind will convince you of things that haven't happened. Have faith not fear, well done, blessings, Roy
Typo : And sells (this) types...these? 2: this (si) is the best therapy...is? 3; therefore
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I don't think the heat will kill the virus, the human body is pretty warm, Yeh, yes, things like Skype, or FaceTime keeps in touch with FaceTime, well done, stopping thinking too much, your mind will convince you of things that haven't happened. Have faith not fear, well done, blessings, Roy
Typo : And sells (this) types...these? 2: this (si) is the best therapy...is? 3; therefore
Comment Written 29-Mar-2020