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Man running at beach, no water to drink.
2 total reviews
Comment from
Elizabeth Emerald
As I runner, I can relate to legs like cement. (Had to drop out of 10K after 4M.) I like sizzling and dizzying and drop to sand, wait for dead--that in itself earns your stars. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 29-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
Hi Liz,
Admire your attempt at running a 10K. Thanks for the read and the comments.
Comment from
RodG
I've often had such dreams where I am running endlessly and getting no where. Your repetend (repeating words) gives us a sense of slow motion. You certainly evoke sympathy for the runner. Rod
Comment Written 29-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
Thanks much for the read and comment, Rod. I also have a repeating dream, but I am on a train running through the cars trying to escape Nazis. Wonder what that is all about.
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