Past Comforts
Bringing me joy11 total reviews
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Use These Words writing prompt.
This lovely verse uses the required words smoothly.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the Use These Words writing prompt.
This lovely verse uses the required words smoothly.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Thank you for this wonderful review. :)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your poem, Mystery Author. The required words fit is seamlessly. I like how you used bellow as what the frogs did. Your picture is beautiful. Your poem is great at remembering the good things before the corona virus. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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You did a great job with your poem, Mystery Author. The required words fit is seamlessly. I like how you used bellow as what the frogs did. Your picture is beautiful. Your poem is great at remembering the good things before the corona virus. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 29-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Thank you for reading my poem and for this lovely review... stay safe.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like how you've used those words. Good childhood memories up to our current world situation. I like how you've intermeshed the two. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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I like how you've used those words. Good childhood memories up to our current world situation. I like how you've intermeshed the two. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 29-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Thank you for reading my poem and for being so kind...God bless.
Comment from zanya
Yes very interesting angle on the Use these words - recalling comforting memories from the past and abiding there for a little respite from our present topsy turvy world
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Yes very interesting angle on the Use these words - recalling comforting memories from the past and abiding there for a little respite from our present topsy turvy world
Comment Written 29-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Thanks for reading my poem and for this great review. :)
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Old childhood memories can be places of safety we can retreat to in harsh times. Today there few safe places other than our home. It is better to dream of days gone by and pray they return.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Old childhood memories can be places of safety we can retreat to in harsh times. Today there few safe places other than our home. It is better to dream of days gone by and pray they return.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Thank you for reading my poem and for your insightful comments.
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You're quite welcome.
Comment from WriterHeather
This is simply lovely. What wonderful memories you have conveyed in this peice! I love the rhyme scheme and this peice flows beautifully. Definitely worthy of 6 stars!
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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This is simply lovely. What wonderful memories you have conveyed in this peice! I love the rhyme scheme and this peice flows beautifully. Definitely worthy of 6 stars!
Comment Written 29-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Thank you for this great review, anf for reading my poem. :)
Comment from Ogden
That's an adroit response to the "Use These Words" contest. You have created a poem-full of faux pleasant memories with meter that flows beautifully (with one anomaly. The meter in the final line is a little clunky.)
(You can't expect to be perfect all the time.)
:o)
Ogden (Don)
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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That's an adroit response to the "Use These Words" contest. You have created a poem-full of faux pleasant memories with meter that flows beautifully (with one anomaly. The meter in the final line is a little clunky.)
(You can't expect to be perfect all the time.)
:o)
Ogden (Don)
Comment Written 29-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Thanks for reading. I agree about that last line.. I actually corrected it before I read your review :). Thanks again.
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You're very welcome.
Don
Comment from padumachitta
Hello
A good poem for the contest. A strange bunch of words put together in good use.
With many now in isolation,
this poem gives a sense of positive memory...
well done images
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Hello
A good poem for the contest. A strange bunch of words put together in good use.
With many now in isolation,
this poem gives a sense of positive memory...
well done images
Comment Written 29-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Yes they are! Thanks so much for reading my poem and for this nice review. :)
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Four prompted words are used well, this poem tells and help you remember the soft summer rain and give you past comforts; wish this entry win the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Four prompted words are used well, this poem tells and help you remember the soft summer rain and give you past comforts; wish this entry win the contest.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Thank you for reading my poem and for the good wishes.. stay safe.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Lovely, flows unforced in rhythm and rhyme. Fresh imagery: icicles/chandeliers...lampshade making shapes...breath turning to steam...Well done. Cheers. LIZ
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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Lovely, flows unforced in rhythm and rhyme. Fresh imagery: icicles/chandeliers...lampshade making shapes...breath turning to steam...Well done. Cheers. LIZ
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Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Thank you for this nice review, it lifted my spirits :)
