Get Those Leaves
A gift that was too late.4 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is a very compelling account. It is limited in scope, imagery and sensations because of the limitation of word count. You have done a fine job in spite of these limitations.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
This is a very compelling account. It is limited in scope, imagery and sensations because of the limitation of word count. You have done a fine job in spite of these limitations.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Thanks much for your read and comments.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Aaah! So many of these dreadful accidents when cleaning the eavestrough. Thank God they now have the new screened equipment that keeps the leaves out and lets the water flow. Good story but sorry about the ending. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
Aaah! So many of these dreadful accidents when cleaning the eavestrough. Thank God they now have the new screened equipment that keeps the leaves out and lets the water flow. Good story but sorry about the ending. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Thanks for your sympathy. We now have screening on the gutters. Have not been on the roof since. Thanks for the read and the comments.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Well, I know you meant it as comedic relief (maybe?), but it's still a painful thought... and I'm sure it was a painful reality!! :/ :/A good story for the contest - best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
Well, I know you meant it as comedic relief (maybe?), but it's still a painful thought... and I'm sure it was a painful reality!! :/ :/A good story for the contest - best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Thanks for the read and the comments. Maybe it was and maybe it wasn't.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good image.
-I noticed this was non-fiction.
-I read it first before
I looked at that.
-The description of this
situation is very good.
-You were well prepared
to get the job done.
-I guess you could say this
story definitely had a
twist at the end.
-Hope you are doing okay!
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
-Good image.
-I noticed this was non-fiction.
-I read it first before
I looked at that.
-The description of this
situation is very good.
-You were well prepared
to get the job done.
-I guess you could say this
story definitely had a
twist at the end.
-Hope you are doing okay!
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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I checked the instructions it did not say flash fiction rather stated a story did not allude to fiction. I believe a story can be non-fiction. I hope it passes. I love you "twist at the end" statement. Thanks for the read and comments.