Green
The dicotamy of a painful inward struggle.6 total reviews
Comment from Jen Vasquez
Well written I must say... Excellent use and unique choice of descriptive words while incorporating the word itself in the poem "JEALOUSY"
"" leaving one feeling
truly LOUSY!""
Wonderful..good work
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Well written I must say... Excellent use and unique choice of descriptive words while incorporating the word itself in the poem "JEALOUSY"
"" leaving one feeling
truly LOUSY!""
Wonderful..good work
Comment Written 31-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Martie Zuckerman
It took me a minute, but I found the word within the writing! Very clever. I am a big fan of rhyming poetry and am not usually "impressed" in most free verse. This little ditty however is exceptional. I remain very impressed with your creation. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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It took me a minute, but I found the word within the writing! Very clever. I am a big fan of rhyming poetry and am not usually "impressed" in most free verse. This little ditty however is exceptional. I remain very impressed with your creation. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Thank You!
Comment from lyenochka
Great definition using one line. A simple act of "comparing" oneself to the another can lead to the other emotions of "Envy" and "Anger" and I like your illustrating with the tiger. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Great definition using one line. A simple act of "comparing" oneself to the another can lead to the other emotions of "Envy" and "Anger" and I like your illustrating with the tiger. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Thank You!
Comment from Mary D Hollingsworth
I really love the color green that was chosen and the synonymous match with Envy. I love the way the writer pointed out the feeling one gets after being engaged in the episodes of jealousy. The author cleverly describes what jealousy is and the results of it I love this precise description of jealousy.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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I really love the color green that was chosen and the synonymous match with Envy. I love the way the writer pointed out the feeling one gets after being engaged in the episodes of jealousy. The author cleverly describes what jealousy is and the results of it I love this precise description of jealousy.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Thank You!
Comment from Gloria ....
The artwork by zoombeeart is terrific and an inspired choice to complement one word, jealousy. Comparing can lead to envy and then the tiger comes out to take a leap of surprise.
Excellent entry into the contest and best of luck to you in the voting booth.
Gloria
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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The artwork by zoombeeart is terrific and an inspired choice to complement one word, jealousy. Comparing can lead to envy and then the tiger comes out to take a leap of surprise.
Excellent entry into the contest and best of luck to you in the voting booth.
Gloria
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Thank You Gloria!
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Wow. Clever acrostic--doesn't sound forced like so many do, and has a fresh message starting with the basic being just comparing yourself to others leads to...Well done! Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Wow. Clever acrostic--doesn't sound forced like so many do, and has a fresh message starting with the basic being just comparing yourself to others leads to...Well done! Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Thank You Liz!
