Jealousy (an Acrostic)
Jealousy and Envy are Friends48 total reviews
Comment from Drew Delaney
Loved the presentation with this well written poem. The choice of words is also excellent! I think you have a good contender for this contest. Best wishes and be well.
Drew
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Loved the presentation with this well written poem. The choice of words is also excellent! I think you have a good contender for this contest. Best wishes and be well.
Drew
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and comments they are greatly appreciated.
Blessings...
Comment from LisaMay
I think jealousy is envy on steroids, where it gets out of control and obsessive behaviour takes over. Your poem is an excellent acrostic with good rhyming as well. For me, the best line that sums up the personal impact of envy/jealousy is:" "Little by little, it will steal your joy".
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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I think jealousy is envy on steroids, where it gets out of control and obsessive behaviour takes over. Your poem is an excellent acrostic with good rhyming as well. For me, the best line that sums up the personal impact of envy/jealousy is:" "Little by little, it will steal your joy".
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and comments, they are greatly appreciated
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Comment from Iza Deleanu
What a wonderful poem, I think this poem could be used as an excellent example to explain these feelings in a classroom setting for kids. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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What a wonderful poem, I think this poem could be used as an excellent example to explain these feelings in a classroom setting for kids. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and comments, they are greatly appreciated.
Blessings
Comment from moongirlwriter
This is well done, especially the subject. I also enjoyed the graphic, it's perfect. As I'm reading it through I must say. . .somehow that last line didn't actually finish it for me. You followed all the rules and it does flow well. and that last line does have a typo: like envy is (should be in). :)
I LOVE IT! Now it's finished. . .well almost. This is REALLY so much better,
except. . .I think you need to add: yet, ready to attack. :)
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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This is well done, especially the subject. I also enjoyed the graphic, it's perfect. As I'm reading it through I must say. . .somehow that last line didn't actually finish it for me. You followed all the rules and it does flow well. and that last line does have a typo: like envy is (should be in). :)
I LOVE IT! Now it's finished. . .well almost. This is REALLY so much better,
except. . .I think you need to add: yet, ready to attack. :)
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and comments. I appreciate you bringing the typo to my attention, since the last line didn't finish it for you I redid the last line, I hope it works for you now. I appreciate you honest opinion.
Blessings...
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I love the message conveyed in this. You've described these twins beautifully. Nothing good comes from them as you've so eloquently stated. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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I love the message conveyed in this. You've described these twins beautifully. Nothing good comes from them as you've so eloquently stated. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and comments.
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Comment from Jlance1208
I think the use of acrostics in this poem really help get your point across. It is a wonderful poem, and I can tell you put a lot of thought into this.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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I think the use of acrostics in this poem really help get your point across. It is a wonderful poem, and I can tell you put a lot of thought into this.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and comments.
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Comment from Puzzle
This was really good! I like how you did the word with what your wrote. It fits the contest rules and I
Like how you formatted it as well good luck in the contest!! Good job
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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This was really good! I like how you did the word with what your wrote. It fits the contest rules and I
Like how you formatted it as well good luck in the contest!! Good job
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and comments.
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Comment from w.j.debi
An excellent definition poem. Jealousy and envy seem to be close cousins or maybe even siblings that like to party together. Excellent formatting to make this a visually appealing poem, and the perfect artwork to support your message.
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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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An excellent definition poem. Jealousy and envy seem to be close cousins or maybe even siblings that like to party together. Excellent formatting to make this a visually appealing poem, and the perfect artwork to support your message.
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Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and comments.
Blessings
