Jealousy (an Acrostic)
Jealousy and Envy are Friends48 total reviews
Comment from Minglement
This is a good entry for the one Word jealousy contest. using the acrostic form allowed you great space and a springboard for all the element. Yes, jealousy is a thief of joy. Well done good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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This is a good entry for the one Word jealousy contest. using the acrostic form allowed you great space and a springboard for all the element. Yes, jealousy is a thief of joy. Well done good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Thanks so much for your review and comments, they are greatly appreciated. Stay well...have a blessed weekend.
Blessings..
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Most welcome - and you, too ;)
Comment from l.raven
I love your poem...every word is correct...
I think everyone has a little jealousy in them...
but it does still your joy away...very well written...
and your picture is perfect...good luck in the contest...
love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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I love your poem...every word is correct...
I think everyone has a little jealousy in them...
but it does still your joy away...very well written...
and your picture is perfect...good luck in the contest...
love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Thanks so much for your review and comments, they are greatly appreciated. Stay well...have a blessed weekend.
Blessings...
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your sooooo welcome...stay safe as well...and have a blessed weekend too...love xxoo
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Jealousy (an acrostic)", is an extremely well-written and deftly descriptive piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work.
To me, this is a six, but sadly I've run out of them. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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"Jealousy (an acrostic)", is an extremely well-written and deftly descriptive piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work.
To me, this is a six, but sadly I've run out of them. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Thanks so much for your review and comments, they are greatly appreciated. Stay well...have a blessed weekend.
Blessings...
Comment from Patty Palmer
Very good! I like the Acrostic poems. They look nice too. I think they flow well. Good luck with the contest!
Stay safe and stay healthy!
God bless!
Patty
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Very good! I like the Acrostic poems. They look nice too. I think they flow well. Good luck with the contest!
Stay safe and stay healthy!
God bless!
Patty
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and comments.
Blessings...
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You're welcome!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your presentation is great, Mystery Author. I like the image--good choice, the color scheme--intensifies the message, the use of red on the first letters of the line does, too, and the rhymes. Your message is clear. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Your presentation is great, Mystery Author. I like the image--good choice, the color scheme--intensifies the message, the use of red on the first letters of the line does, too, and the rhymes. Your message is clear. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Thanks so much for your review and comments, they are greatly appreciated. Stay well...have a blessed weekend.
Blessings...
Comment from Therese Caron
Great descriptions of envy and jealousy! They are very similar, both with destructive outcomes. Whether huge or petty, there is always damage done. You have covered these damages very well. You chose a great image also, with the "poster" on top of the poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Great descriptions of envy and jealousy! They are very similar, both with destructive outcomes. Whether huge or petty, there is always damage done. You have covered these damages very well. You chose a great image also, with the "poster" on top of the poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Thanks so much for your review and comments, they are greatly appreciated. Stay well...have a blessed weekend.
Blessings...
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and
very nice presentation.
-Your acrostic is poetic
with very good descriptions.
-I also like how you personify
jealousy: "Only to gossip and bully more."
-Effective rhyme and very good
concluding lines.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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-Good artwork and
very nice presentation.
-Your acrostic is poetic
with very good descriptions.
-I also like how you personify
jealousy: "Only to gossip and bully more."
-Effective rhyme and very good
concluding lines.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Thanks so much for your review and comments, they are greatly appreciated. Stay well..
Blessings...
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You are welcome and you do the same.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Wow, what a poem! The acrostic format is not an easy one to use with rhyme and meter, yet you have accomplished it beautifully! I love your presentation too. Best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Wow, what a poem! The acrostic format is not an easy one to use with rhyme and meter, yet you have accomplished it beautifully! I love your presentation too. Best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review, six star rating, very kind comments and best wishes.
Blessings...
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Gloria ....
This is a fine acrostic poem, author. Jealousy and envy do have some overlap, but for the most part they are two different emotions in that Jealousy is a triad and envy is a dyad.
You clearly captured many of the activities associated with jealousy and I'm not sure what you meant by Yearning for what others have, read (ready?) to attack?
And your layout works well as it shows the destruction of jealousy growing larger with each assault.
Excellent entry into the contest and I wish you well in the voting booth.
Gloria
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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This is a fine acrostic poem, author. Jealousy and envy do have some overlap, but for the most part they are two different emotions in that Jealousy is a triad and envy is a dyad.
You clearly captured many of the activities associated with jealousy and I'm not sure what you meant by Yearning for what others have, read (ready?) to attack?
And your layout works well as it shows the destruction of jealousy growing larger with each assault.
Excellent entry into the contest and I wish you well in the voting booth.
Gloria
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and comments they are greatly appreciated.
Blessings...
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello anon, this is an excellent acrostic. You perfectly describe jealousy. You make a good comparison to envy - they are very similar. Some good rhyme and a lovely display. Good Luck in the contest. Regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Hello anon, this is an excellent acrostic. You perfectly describe jealousy. You make a good comparison to envy - they are very similar. Some good rhyme and a lovely display. Good Luck in the contest. Regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and comments they are greatly appreciated.
Blessings...
