Jealousy (an Acrostic)
Jealousy and Envy are Friends48 total reviews
Comment from June Sargent
Yearning for what others have obsessively can consume a person. The heart and mind are totally filled with such negative emotions that he cannot function without fear and hate. So dangerous.
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Yearning for what others have obsessively can consume a person. The heart and mind are totally filled with such negative emotions that he cannot function without fear and hate. So dangerous.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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June,
Thank you kindly for your review and comments, they are greatly appreciated. Stay well...
Blessings..
Comment from Gail Denham
I pray that we don't come down to that level - and begin to crave what others have. I want to share the goodness God's blessed us with - not be jealous of those who are rich - etc.
Good poem to point this out and the dangers of jealousy
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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I pray that we don't come down to that level - and begin to crave what others have. I want to share the goodness God's blessed us with - not be jealous of those who are rich - etc.
Good poem to point this out and the dangers of jealousy
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and comments, they are greatly appreciated. Stay well...
Blessings..
Comment from harmony13
The author words are extremely strong, clear and creative. I found this
poem to get right to the point and addresses a troubling issue.
The artwork is great and compliments the words and theme of this poem.
Stay well and be safe.....harmony13
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The author words are extremely strong, clear and creative. I found this
poem to get right to the point and addresses a troubling issue.
The artwork is great and compliments the words and theme of this poem.
Stay well and be safe.....harmony13
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and comments.
Blessings..
Comment from papa55mike
What wonderfully written acrostic poem. I love how you made the first letters in each line really stand out. Best of luck with your writing.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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What wonderfully written acrostic poem. I love how you made the first letters in each line really stand out. Best of luck with your writing.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and comments. Stay well...
Blessings..
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
You have portrayed the subject quite nicely in an Acrostic poem. It is very puzzling to me how one person can resent another's accomplishments, and another person will praise them. The environment we grow up in, I believe has much to do with this attitude. Jealousy is a monstrous characteristic.
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You have portrayed the subject quite nicely in an Acrostic poem. It is very puzzling to me how one person can resent another's accomplishments, and another person will praise them. The environment we grow up in, I believe has much to do with this attitude. Jealousy is a monstrous characteristic.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and comments. Stay well...
Blessings..
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Friend,
It's a lovely piece of poetry in the form of an Acrostic meeting the desired norms, having smooth flow throughout from top the bottom, and beautifully depicting its theme.
These lines are particularly noteworthy:
"Unable to show...on track."
BEST OF LUCK in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Hello Friend,
It's a lovely piece of poetry in the form of an Acrostic meeting the desired norms, having smooth flow throughout from top the bottom, and beautifully depicting its theme.
These lines are particularly noteworthy:
"Unable to show...on track."
BEST OF LUCK in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and comments, they are greatly appreciated. Stay well...
Blessings..
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Portia, Most Welcome!
Wishing you Best of Luck,
~ RP
Comment from Ogden
Well done! You've nailed jealousy as if you have had some experience with it (as many of us have). Your words are wise, and your presentation is striking. I think it deserves to do well in the contest.
Ogden )Don)
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Well done! You've nailed jealousy as if you have had some experience with it (as many of us have). Your words are wise, and your presentation is striking. I think it deserves to do well in the contest.
Ogden )Don)
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Don,
Yes my friend, jealousy and envy from a sister and brother almost destroyed our family.
Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments, as always they are appreciated. Stay well and have a blessed weekend.
Blessings...
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I'm sorry to hear that. You take care, too, and stay safe as you are!
Don
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This acrostic poem expressively tells nature, and negative effect of jealousy; well said, well done; thank you for sharing this; wish you win the contest. Help upgrade my premier shield membership.
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This acrostic poem expressively tells nature, and negative effect of jealousy; well said, well done; thank you for sharing this; wish you win the contest. Help upgrade my premier shield membership.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and comments, they are greatly appreciated. Stay well...
Blessings..
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Nice job with the acrostic--can be a challenge not to feel forced; you handle it well. It would be a decent piece even disregarding the constraint of an acrostic. Cheers. LIZ
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Nice job with the acrostic--can be a challenge not to feel forced; you handle it well. It would be a decent piece even disregarding the constraint of an acrostic. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and comments, they are greatly appreciated. Stay well...
Blessings..
Comment from jenintorre
This is so true and to the point. You have written an excellent acrostic poem which I think should do really well in the competition. Good luck and best wishes. Jen.
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This is so true and to the point. You have written an excellent acrostic poem which I think should do really well in the competition. Good luck and best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and comments, they are greatly appreciated. Stay well...
Blessings..
