Jealousy (an Acrostic)
Jealousy and Envy are Friends48 total reviews
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, perfection, in form and rhyming rhythm - though uneven in design and layout [the script should be moved a bit to the left], the verse remains flawless in its presentation in compliance with the prompt. Best wishes in the contest...
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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In my opinion, perfection, in form and rhyming rhythm - though uneven in design and layout [the script should be moved a bit to the left], the verse remains flawless in its presentation in compliance with the prompt. Best wishes in the contest...
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and comments.
Blessings...
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You are very welcome - stunning verse...Eve
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You are very kind...stay well
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Thank you, and I wish you the same...Eve
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
It's something we've all felt or been victim to. We're always comparing or being compared to something else. You did a great job capturing this word in your poem.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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It's something we've all felt or been victim to. We're always comparing or being compared to something else. You did a great job capturing this word in your poem.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and comments.
Blessings...
Comment from Kermit R. Mullins
"Yearning for what others have" this is so true. I was raised to go out an earn the things you want in life. Look at others as an example of how to accomplish your goals, not trying to steal theirs. Jealousy is a Thief. Well done and best wishes.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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"Yearning for what others have" this is so true. I was raised to go out an earn the things you want in life. Look at others as an example of how to accomplish your goals, not trying to steal theirs. Jealousy is a Thief. Well done and best wishes.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and comments.
Blessings...
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Thank you kindly for your review and comments.
Blessings...
Comment from Bichon
This was a very well written and throughout out acrostic poem. You have well explained the notions of both and compared their similarities very effectively. Great work!
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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This was a very well written and throughout out acrostic poem. You have well explained the notions of both and compared their similarities very effectively. Great work!
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and comments.
Blessings...
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Thank you kindly for your review and comments.
Blessings...
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Jealousy destroys the person who has it, and hurts the one it's aimed at. It's very sad. I really like how you've written your acrostic, the presentation is lovely. The words stand out and it's so easy to read the word the poem represents. Well done, I really enjoyed reading it. Good luck in the contest! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Jealousy destroys the person who has it, and hurts the one it's aimed at. It's very sad. I really like how you've written your acrostic, the presentation is lovely. The words stand out and it's so easy to read the word the poem represents. Well done, I really enjoyed reading it. Good luck in the contest! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and comments.
Blessings...
Comment from TPAC
I agree, finding your conveyance a great shout out, detailing many admirable considerations for the reader. Very strong and precise swings of a blade leaving no doubts. All stated in my opinion.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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I agree, finding your conveyance a great shout out, detailing many admirable considerations for the reader. Very strong and precise swings of a blade leaving no doubts. All stated in my opinion.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review, six star rating and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Stay well
Blessings...
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written acrostic about jealousy that makes the world a crazy place when we cannot control our thoughts and envy to yearn for others' richness and possesdions.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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A very well-written acrostic about jealousy that makes the world a crazy place when we cannot control our thoughts and envy to yearn for others' richness and possesdions.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and comments.
Blessings...
Comment from Tanvi Pauddar
I liked your poem, especially since you wrote and acrostic. I also liked how you wrote "Jealousy is like envy in so many ways." I never really thought about that, but when I read your poem, I realized it is true. Good luck in the contest!!!
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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I liked your poem, especially since you wrote and acrostic. I also liked how you wrote "Jealousy is like envy in so many ways." I never really thought about that, but when I read your poem, I realized it is true. Good luck in the contest!!!
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and comments.
Blessings...
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You're welcome
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a nicely written acrostic definition of jealousy and envy. It matches the contest well. I always thought Jealousy was a negative emotion of thinking someone wants someting of yours and envy is a negative feeling of you wanting what someone else has.
Good luck in the contest. Stay healthy and keep writing
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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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This is a nicely written acrostic definition of jealousy and envy. It matches the contest well. I always thought Jealousy was a negative emotion of thinking someone wants someting of yours and envy is a negative feeling of you wanting what someone else has.
Good luck in the contest. Stay healthy and keep writing
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Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Thanks so much for your review, comments, and best wishes they are greatly appreciated. Stay well...have a blessed weekend.
Blessings...
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You are most kindly welcome. Blessings and stay healthy
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Comment from Bill Schott
This acrostic poem, JEALOUSY, follows the vertical theme and shows that there is no good side to this deadly sin of destructive envy.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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This acrostic poem, JEALOUSY, follows the vertical theme and shows that there is no good side to this deadly sin of destructive envy.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and comments, they are greatly appreciated. Stay well...
Blessings...
