When Spring Came
A cheery acrostic for all ages18 total reviews
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This speaks of romance in the air, and the lighthearted, airy, blossoming, and new life of Spring. I like what you've presented here and enjoyed reading this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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This speaks of romance in the air, and the lighthearted, airy, blossoming, and new life of Spring. I like what you've presented here and enjoyed reading this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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I don't usually write acrostics, but this one was fun to write. Many thanks for sharing it and your kind praise. Rod
Comment from Bill Schott
This acrostic poem, WHEN SPRING CAME, follows the vertical theme and finds our couple, Nadine and Petey, soaking in the sunshine and feeling out each other's inclinations to get serious. Nice.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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This acrostic poem, WHEN SPRING CAME, follows the vertical theme and finds our couple, Nadine and Petey, soaking in the sunshine and feeling out each other's inclinations to get serious. Nice.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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I love your phrasing in this review, Bill. It made me chuckle. Thank you for sharing.
Comment from A. Willow Bends
Lovely. The Acrostic form is truly great when it incorporates rhyme, in my personal opinion. Also, an upbeat reading this morning is very welcoming as we deal mentally and physically with all that we are surrounded by.
This one was a joy to start my day with!
Wendy
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Lovely. The Acrostic form is truly great when it incorporates rhyme, in my personal opinion. Also, an upbeat reading this morning is very welcoming as we deal mentally and physically with all that we are surrounded by.
This one was a joy to start my day with!
Wendy
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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I seldom write acrostic, Wendy, but I enjoyed composing this one. I am so pleased you like it. Rod
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a cleverly rhymed acrostic with a good meter and the sentiments are magical, this is a well written acrostic and I hardly noticed it had to adhered to the rules, a winner for me, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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This is a cleverly rhymed acrostic with a good meter and the sentiments are magical, this is a well written acrostic and I hardly noticed it had to adhered to the rules, a winner for me, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Hi, Dolly. Although I seldom write acrostics, I enjoyed composing this one as doing so brought back some lovely memories. Many thanks for your kind praise. Rod
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Sprig and young love go hand in hand. Spring represents new life, new beginnings so it is a perfect season to allow love to blossom. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Sprig and young love go hand in hand. Spring represents new life, new beginnings so it is a perfect season to allow love to blossom. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much, Rebecca, for your kind praise of my spring acrostic. Rod
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You are welcome. It was a good piece of writing.
Comment from lyenochka
A very sweet poem of happy young lovers. I liked all the dialogue you put in this. Wish you the best in the contest and I'm hoping you'll join the Script in Verse contest.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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A very sweet poem of happy young lovers. I liked all the dialogue you put in this. Wish you the best in the contest and I'm hoping you'll join the Script in Verse contest.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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I am so pleased you like my acrostic and its dialog. Thank you also for the invitation.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
When Spring Came
Hello, my friend,
A lovely poem for the acrostic contest. Good form and beautiful presentation. I remember how much fun it was to kiss. And getting goosebumps when we touched. Those were the days. well done.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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When Spring Came
Hello, my friend,
A lovely poem for the acrostic contest. Good form and beautiful presentation. I remember how much fun it was to kiss. And getting goosebumps when we touched. Those were the days. well done.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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I am so pleased I could bring back some of those romantic moments for you, Gypsy. Thank you for the very kind praise.
Comment from Therese Caron
Very good job on this acrostic poem. I love the line "magnetic were our lips that day." Very unique writing. You also chose a beautiful image to enhance your writing. This is a bright, cheerful poem, just what we all need! Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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Very good job on this acrostic poem. I love the line "magnetic were our lips that day." Very unique writing. You also chose a beautiful image to enhance your writing. This is a bright, cheerful poem, just what we all need! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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I am delighted I could brighten your day, Therese, with my acrostic. Thank you for the kind praise.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your contest entry. Your story told is one of remembrance and a bit of longing. Your words flow smoothly. The rhymes are an added bonus especially in an acrostic. The image is a great pairing with your well-chosen words. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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I enjoyed your contest entry. Your story told is one of remembrance and a bit of longing. Your words flow smoothly. The rhymes are an added bonus especially in an acrostic. The image is a great pairing with your well-chosen words. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 24-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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I am so pleased you enjoyed my acrostic, Jan. These days I do spend much time recalling fond memories.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
A beautiful presentation of innocent love. The art is just so beautiful. Yes I can remember vividly my youthful first love and how wondrous and innocent it was.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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A beautiful presentation of innocent love. The art is just so beautiful. Yes I can remember vividly my youthful first love and how wondrous and innocent it was.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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I am so pleased my poem could bring back fond memories. Many thanks for sharing my poem and your kind praise.
