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Comment from mumsyone
Again, your poem makes no sense to me. It seems to be just a list of random thoughts, although it sounds as though you are speaking of reviewers who review just for the sake of the "money" they can get. Yes, there are those reviewers who may be greedy for points/dollars, but there are also those poets/writers who are greedy for position. I hope you can learn to write with more clarification.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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Again, your poem makes no sense to me. It seems to be just a list of random thoughts, although it sounds as though you are speaking of reviewers who review just for the sake of the "money" they can get. Yes, there are those reviewers who may be greedy for points/dollars, but there are also those poets/writers who are greedy for position. I hope you can learn to write with more clarification.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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THANKS.
Comment from Mastery
What does "wink" mean as you use it in this and other works of ours? Again, I am reviewing this to see if I can ever catch on to your writing style. Thank you for sharing. Bob
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What does "wink" mean as you use it in this and other works of ours? Again, I am reviewing this to see if I can ever catch on to your writing style. Thank you for sharing. Bob
Comment Written 11-Apr-2013
Comment from Bobbi22
Good word choices to describe/define being greedy, however, some seem just like a group of words without any connecting grammatical link.
4th line only has 7 syllables instead of the 8 required in a rictameter
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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Good word choices to describe/define being greedy, however, some seem just like a group of words without any connecting grammatical link.
4th line only has 7 syllables instead of the 8 required in a rictameter
Comment Written 11-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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THANKS.
Comment from artemis53
I am a bit miffed by your writing which truly doesn't reflect upon it. Without your notes I'd be lost. Greedy...some in all of us.
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I am a bit miffed by your writing which truly doesn't reflect upon it. Without your notes I'd be lost. Greedy...some in all of us.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2013
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is well written my friend I think there are many greedy people in this world today making it what it is well done on this write regards Jill
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Yes this is well written my friend I think there are many greedy people in this world today making it what it is well done on this write regards Jill
Comment Written 11-Apr-2013
Comment from Doc Holiday
There are people just out for themselves in this world. They breed in the greed of humanity. But there are also those who are enriched by how much they can share whether it be money or knowledge. Just like the night becomes day, some of the greedy can become enriching, but changes are not for all.
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There are people just out for themselves in this world. They breed in the greed of humanity. But there are also those who are enriched by how much they can share whether it be money or knowledge. Just like the night becomes day, some of the greedy can become enriching, but changes are not for all.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2013
Comment from Caressa_08
Good message that you type of greed, this selfishness, that can cause so many problems..writing you do about shade for a time, that, doesn't produce any results, because this poem's character projected just doesn't see the light of day, the keys ...Being Greedy!.is still the problem..from the start to the end..
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Good message that you type of greed, this selfishness, that can cause so many problems..writing you do about shade for a time, that, doesn't produce any results, because this poem's character projected just doesn't see the light of day, the keys ...Being Greedy!.is still the problem..from the start to the end..
Comment Written 11-Apr-2013
Comment from mizzkris20
This one made me smile... I guess we all feel that way some times (People reviewing for a member dollar and not really reading). Anyways, I read it, lol
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This one made me smile... I guess we all feel that way some times (People reviewing for a member dollar and not really reading). Anyways, I read it, lol
Comment Written 11-Apr-2013
Comment from Cedar
This one for me is a little easier to understand, especially your subject. Greed is an awful thing and can create serious problems. It is amazing to see (after reading many of your reviews) how so many reviewers give you an "average" while there are many more that give you an "exceptional". There are so many varied opinions, but that's what makes the world go round.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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This one for me is a little easier to understand, especially your subject. Greed is an awful thing and can create serious problems. It is amazing to see (after reading many of your reviews) how so many reviewers give you an "average" while there are many more that give you an "exceptional". There are so many varied opinions, but that's what makes the world go round.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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THANKS.
Comment from K.W.
Great adherence to form. Great message. This write is much more approachable. Especially like the line "pride poor like fools". Well done, very best :) k
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Great adherence to form. Great message. This write is much more approachable. Especially like the line "pride poor like fools". Well done, very best :) k
Comment Written 11-Apr-2013
