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Comment from Raul1
This poem is interesting and unique. I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It's beautifully written. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
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This poem is interesting and unique. I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It's beautifully written. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 04-Jun-2021
Comment from Boogienights
Your poems are interesting in that they are a puzzle that needs unraveling. I take it that you mean people are greedy( I agree ) and that God disapproves ( I also agree with that ). I wish though that you could make them a little bit clearer, because I think you have important things to say. Thanks for sharing. :)
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Your poems are interesting in that they are a puzzle that needs unraveling. I take it that you mean people are greedy( I agree ) and that God disapproves ( I also agree with that ). I wish though that you could make them a little bit clearer, because I think you have important things to say. Thanks for sharing. :)
Comment Written 04-Jun-2021
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Greedy!
by Alcreator Litt Dear
Nice free verse about this and that and how we exist in our own world of illusions. A very unique poem and interesting wording.
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Greedy!
by Alcreator Litt Dear
Nice free verse about this and that and how we exist in our own world of illusions. A very unique poem and interesting wording.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2021
Comment from barbara.wilkey
You are correct. Humans are greedy in almost everything we do. I guess we can't help ourselves, but with God's help we can become less greedy. But we need to ask God. Thank you for sharing.
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You are correct. Humans are greedy in almost everything we do. I guess we can't help ourselves, but with God's help we can become less greedy. But we need to ask God. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2021
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I understand greed to be gluttonous and avaricious, I don't see it as (haste), (boastful), (chatty), or (escape), what does (ignore keys) mean? I found your poem confusing and I would really like to know what it means? Love Dolly x
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I understand greed to be gluttonous and avaricious, I don't see it as (haste), (boastful), (chatty), or (escape), what does (ignore keys) mean? I found your poem confusing and I would really like to know what it means? Love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Jun-2021
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
Very unusual style. I like it for its creativity. the brevity of expressing deep thoughts. Greed is not that concerns the stock market and other financial issues. It mainly centres around the heart. The ignorant mind is full of greed, illusions and anger. We must shun these sins. Thanks for sharing!
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Very unusual style. I like it for its creativity. the brevity of expressing deep thoughts. Greed is not that concerns the stock market and other financial issues. It mainly centres around the heart. The ignorant mind is full of greed, illusions and anger. We must shun these sins. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 04-Jun-2021
Comment from Bloomer Burbs
Hi Alcreator Litt Dear
Glutany and greed are human traits that bring out the very worst in most people, especially when we, in the rich countries already have so much! Material thing alone will never buy you happiness, that I do know.
Thanks for sharing, Pete
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Hi Alcreator Litt Dear
Glutany and greed are human traits that bring out the very worst in most people, especially when we, in the rich countries already have so much! Material thing alone will never buy you happiness, that I do know.
Thanks for sharing, Pete
Comment Written 04-Jun-2021
Comment from Lana Marie
I enjoyed your creative approach to writing in a free form you put together and your explanations of why you write like you do.
I too believe in God and believe he has gifted us all in unique ways. You are using your creativity to express what we all encounter in poetic form.
Thank You for sharing your gift.
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I enjoyed your creative approach to writing in a free form you put together and your explanations of why you write like you do.
I too believe in God and believe he has gifted us all in unique ways. You are using your creativity to express what we all encounter in poetic form.
Thank You for sharing your gift.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2021
Comment from Senyai
Hi again ALCREATOR,
This is another great enigmatic poem that has subtle meanings that can be missed if not read carefully. I believe you speak of the ravages of the sin of Greed. It is one of the Seven Deadly sins and can bring about much grief and misery in one's life. Also, if enough people are greedy, the sin can multiply and bring a nation to it's knees. You have a distinct way of expression that shades your meanings so your words are artfully ambiguous.
All the best,
Senyai
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Hi again ALCREATOR,
This is another great enigmatic poem that has subtle meanings that can be missed if not read carefully. I believe you speak of the ravages of the sin of Greed. It is one of the Seven Deadly sins and can bring about much grief and misery in one's life. Also, if enough people are greedy, the sin can multiply and bring a nation to it's knees. You have a distinct way of expression that shades your meanings so your words are artfully ambiguous.
All the best,
Senyai
Comment Written 04-Jun-2021
Comment from jaydub99
Interesting piece. It seems to have a definite rhythm but the message seems a little convoluted to me. I get the feeling you are trying to push out a message but it seems to be covered in word salad. It seemed to have a clear structure but perhaps I am missing the key. Thanks for posting.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2013
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Interesting piece. It seems to have a definite rhythm but the message seems a little convoluted to me. I get the feeling you are trying to push out a message but it seems to be covered in word salad. It seemed to have a clear structure but perhaps I am missing the key. Thanks for posting.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2013
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