Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

Hi Alcreator, another one of your very thought provoking poems. I do sometimes have a lot of trouble understanding your poems, but I do try. I would never say anything negative about a fellow writer, because that would be rude and because every one of us writes the way we want to write, and our thoughts and feelings are what we are. Keep writing! xsx Sandra

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2013

Comment from cheyennewy

Excellent

Hi Alcreator,

This is a poem that begs to be pondered and understood. I think you have captured the essence of greed and done it poetically. It would be awful not to leave just a little mark from someone. All of us would like to be remembered even a little. Good poem and I hope I didn't fracture the meaning too bad! chey

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2013

Comment from jmdg1954

Good

Other than the line requiring eight syllable (contains seven) it follows the Ricatmeter. But, once again, words thrown to the wall and see where they stick.
Like the Financial Analyst who chucks a dart at the NYSE listing as his "pick of the year".
Sorry, no go my friend.
John

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013

THANKS.

Comment from ravenblack

Good

if by greed, you mean reviews you don't like, then you are wrong. I have looked through other reviews, and frankly, this one does not make much sense. yes, I feel the emotion, but it is just words splattered on the page. the true greed is not expressing the truth as you see it in reviewing.

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013

THANKS.

Comment from Robert Loy Gonzalez

Excellent

i enjoyed reading this, great job on the syllables and once again a great job writting it. ive been reading a few and reviewing them also so keep it up!

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2013

Comment from visionary1234

Excellent

oh dear Al - I'm sorry, but I wish your pieces had a more lucid thread running through them which would make them more accessible to me dear.

Think, boast, chat, pride poor like fools - has only 7 syllables

:)

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2013

Comment from mshirachot

Excellent

Great job with the rictameter style. This is a very descriptive work about greediness. It does chatter annoyingly like a noisy jaybird.

Thanks for sharing!
Blessings!
Marsha

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2013

Comment from allborn66

Excellent

This is a thought-provoking poem. I like how you communicated your theme. I really liked the consequences of greed mentioned in your piece.
Barbara

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2013

Comment from Alexander E Poet

Excellent

Good insights, a nice poetic flow, very enjoyable, great picture for this subject, not hard to follow a the message is good No typo's and nothing to change as far as i can see.Alexander Q*Q

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2013

Comment from Nebukadneser

Excellent

Another gem, oh wise one of brilliant poems and profound thoughts.
I love and adore your writing - It is cryptic, yet is says so much as this poem on the foolishness and emptiness of greed, while the wise looks on and can only smile at the fallacy of greed.
Well done
you rock, my man
cool bananas and warm regards

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2013