D-day
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Comment from Bill Schott
This 1-6-1 poem, D-Day, has the right number of words in it and may stand for the depression brought on by the denial of free movement. Rough times.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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This 1-6-1 poem, D-Day, has the right number of words in it and may stand for the depression brought on by the denial of free movement. Rough times.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Thank you, Mr. Bill
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A poignant write as we all have to stay indoors to stay safe and we all need our prayers just now as we live in fear of the virus, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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A poignant write as we all have to stay indoors to stay safe and we all need our prayers just now as we live in fear of the virus, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much, Ms. Dolly and please stay safe.
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You stay sae too Iza, these are trying times x x x
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Yes, sincere and heartfelt prayer will be answered. Once we have prayed, we can lie down and get a peaceful full night's sleep.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Yes, sincere and heartfelt prayer will be answered. Once we have prayed, we can lie down and get a peaceful full night's sleep.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much Rebecca, the scariest it is the more I'm lost.
Comment from Therese Caron
A clear, concise, poem with only 1-6-1 syllables to use for words. You did a lot with this one, it is simple and clear, and beautifully written. The image is very moving. Your title is perfect ; D-Day. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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A clear, concise, poem with only 1-6-1 syllables to use for words. You did a lot with this one, it is simple and clear, and beautifully written. The image is very moving. Your title is perfect ; D-Day. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much, Ms. Therese
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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D-day
Hello, my friend,
Nice entry for the 1/6/1 poem contest. Good syllable count. The presentation is effective. You have a small mistake in your author notes....
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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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D-day
Hello, my friend,
Nice entry for the 1/6/1 poem contest. Good syllable count. The presentation is effective. You have a small mistake in your author notes....
across tje board
Comment Written 24-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review and for catching that mistake in my notes:)
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Not sure what you mean by stray here. What does it have to do with the rest? Cried and begged and pray are common expressions--try something fresher. Use your lines well. All the best. LIZ
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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Not sure what you mean by stray here. What does it have to do with the rest? Cried and begged and pray are common expressions--try something fresher. Use your lines well. All the best. LIZ
Comment Written 24-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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Stray I meant like people who are on the street, that are scared.
Comment from Fonda Little
My favorite part was, "I cried and begged today
Pray", because praying is always great in times of difficulty! To believe and receive The Grace of God to have the strength to carry out His Will!
The Lord led me to this verse after I read this,
Psalm 120:1 New International Version (NIV)
1 I call on the Lord in my distress,
and he answers me.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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My favorite part was, "I cried and begged today
Pray", because praying is always great in times of difficulty! To believe and receive The Grace of God to have the strength to carry out His Will!
The Lord led me to this verse after I read this,
Psalm 120:1 New International Version (NIV)
1 I call on the Lord in my distress,
and he answers me.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, you capture exactly the message that I was trying to send over.
Comment from Cindy Decker
An outstanding poem! Theirs is a difficult format to master. And you've done it very well. I hope my review is not too late for the contest. Good luck.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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An outstanding poem! Theirs is a difficult format to master. And you've done it very well. I hope my review is not too late for the contest. Good luck.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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Thank you Cindy, and don't worry about the contest, usually I am a loser:)
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You never know when you?ll be a winner! Good luck with continuing on?that?s what I do! Stay well.
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent poem for the 1-6-1 contest
with three very good rhymes.
I assume D-day refers to the invasion day in WWII,
a day when many prayed.
Excellent photograph to match.
Well done.
Best wishes to you
Robert
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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You've written an excellent poem for the 1-6-1 contest
with three very good rhymes.
I assume D-day refers to the invasion day in WWII,
a day when many prayed.
Excellent photograph to match.
Well done.
Best wishes to you
Robert
Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, D-Day in this case is referring to COVID-19 which I think has the same impact economically and from the point of view of human life.
Comment from Michael McCottry Bell Jr
Interesting piece. I like the rhyme poetic device((I think you chose good words to rhyme in a story converted with only 8 syllables) I feel you could use more poetic devices to make this stand out though. I like the image you chose it fits well.
Michael
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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Interesting piece. I like the rhyme poetic device((I think you chose good words to rhyme in a story converted with only 8 syllables) I feel you could use more poetic devices to make this stand out though. I like the image you chose it fits well.
Michael
Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much, Michael