The Corona saga
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Snake-n-do"to keep my sanity in time of pandemic
6 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
By your story the virus came from snakes...I also heard bats, too. They were making soup from bats. How true this is, I don't know. But I pray to God that things will soon come to a peak so we can start living normal again.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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By your story the virus came from snakes...I also heard bats, too. They were making soup from bats. How true this is, I don't know. But I pray to God that things will soon come to a peak so we can start living normal again.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Hope and prayers are our weapons for this disease
Comment from estory
I think it's interesting to personify the virus, and you have her as that snake eating Chinese lady sneezing on the border agent. It's really sarcastic. Also creates this feeling of an insidious, mysterious stranger among us. With a deadly infection. estory
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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I think it's interesting to personify the virus, and you have her as that snake eating Chinese lady sneezing on the border agent. It's really sarcastic. Also creates this feeling of an insidious, mysterious stranger among us. With a deadly infection. estory
Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for following along:)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your satiric journal entry. Your lines read well with good imagery and dialogue. Your conclusions may not be far off from the truth, sadly. Thanks for sharing. Stat safe. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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I enjoyed your satiric journal entry. Your lines read well with good imagery and dialogue. Your conclusions may not be far off from the truth, sadly. Thanks for sharing. Stat safe. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much Jan:)
Comment from Y. M. Roger
You are certainly still on a tear up there, my lady!! ;) Like the offering of a script -- great adaptation! ;) Thanx for sharing yet another episode of 'Lady Corona does Canada' by Iza Deleanu!! ;) :) Yvette
has as scope to infect your computers and still your data for ransom --> has as goal to infect your computers and hold your data for ransom
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You are certainly still on a tear up there, my lady!! ;) Like the offering of a script -- great adaptation! ;) Thanx for sharing yet another episode of 'Lady Corona does Canada' by Iza Deleanu!! ;) :) Yvette
has as scope to infect your computers and still your data for ransom --> has as goal to infect your computers and hold your data for ransom
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is a convincing piece that provides us with an explanation of why we are in our current difficult situation. It doesn't provide any solutions, but maybe there are none to be had. Technically the mixture of narrative and conversation works well. I find the reference to computer viruses under-developed. Perhaps its place is not in this chapter and it should be saved for elsewhere?
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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This is a convincing piece that provides us with an explanation of why we are in our current difficult situation. It doesn't provide any solutions, but maybe there are none to be had. Technically the mixture of narrative and conversation works well. I find the reference to computer viruses under-developed. Perhaps its place is not in this chapter and it should be saved for elsewhere?
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much Ms. Katherine and I will think about the last piece.
Comment from royowen
You shouldn't obsess about this Iza, your anxiety is exactly what the enemy wants, just be sensible and stop worrying, if you have faith, this is merely a toothless lion, you can give it power dear girl, well done, blessings, Roy
Suggestion : What's the (scope of) your visit. Reason for? Typo: the snakes (has) been, have?
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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You shouldn't obsess about this Iza, your anxiety is exactly what the enemy wants, just be sensible and stop worrying, if you have faith, this is merely a toothless lion, you can give it power dear girl, well done, blessings, Roy
Suggestion : What's the (scope of) your visit. Reason for? Typo: the snakes (has) been, have?
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much Mr. Roy
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Pleasure Iza