John and Shorty Get Cabin Fever
Short humorous western script11 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This script, John and Shorty Get Cabin Fever, is a knee-slapper. These two are so funny I know I would laugh at loud to see the live production. The fourth wall admission about the hula hoop was both funny and questionable, as it is to my observation, the only time that the scene is seen as a play.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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This script, John and Shorty Get Cabin Fever, is a knee-slapper. These two are so funny I know I would laugh at loud to see the live production. The fourth wall admission about the hula hoop was both funny and questionable, as it is to my observation, the only time that the scene is seen as a play.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for reviewing. I had a couple of anachronism jokes in the longer melodrama/comedy such as a reference to a flat tire. It was for the sake of humor by contrast (with the 20th Century). Sure appreciate your time spent!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Did you read her your hilarious script, CC? I enjoyed reading it. I had a good laugh. Your script flowed well, the dialogue was funny and natural sounding, and the artwork sounds like it will bring bugs to attack the beans. This is a fun script. The picture is perfect! Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Did you read her your hilarious script, CC? I enjoyed reading it. I had a good laugh. Your script flowed well, the dialogue was funny and natural sounding, and the artwork sounds like it will bring bugs to attack the beans. This is a fun script. The picture is perfect! Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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I ought to. Thanks for reviewing!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL!! Think the remindin' is part of being elderly - lol!! ;) A wonderful sequel prequel, my lady complete with all dem beans and Shorty's artistic ability! :) Thanx for sharing the cabin fever smile, my lady! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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LOL!! Think the remindin' is part of being elderly - lol!! ;) A wonderful sequel prequel, my lady complete with all dem beans and Shorty's artistic ability! :) Thanx for sharing the cabin fever smile, my lady! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Thank you for reviewing. I keep waiting for someone to say, "Cool beans."
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Lol! Haven't heard that phrase in forever! Was a favorite of my sister years (decades!) ago!! ;)
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Cute story! Maybe cabin fever will strike more wpold be writers to FanStory. Learned a new word today. Stir-crazy means "restless or frantic because of confinement, routine, etc."
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Cute story! Maybe cabin fever will strike more wpold be writers to FanStory. Learned a new word today. Stir-crazy means "restless or frantic because of confinement, routine, etc."
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Thank you for reviewing. I remember there was a movie called Stir Crazy way back in the 1970s, I think.
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I had never heard the word.
Comment from damommy
I feel the same as John and Shorty. Because of my age and having lupus, I'm on lockdown.
This script is hilarious. I like how the horse snickered at the drawings.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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I feel the same as John and Shorty. Because of my age and having lupus, I'm on lockdown.
This script is hilarious. I like how the horse snickered at the drawings.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review.
Comment from lyenochka
Glad to see John and Shorty are back. I like all the of Shorty's funny word mishaps and the anachronism! But he's wasting a lot of food on the artwork. The sheep may end up eating his art!
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Glad to see John and Shorty are back. I like all the of Shorty's funny word mishaps and the anachronism! But he's wasting a lot of food on the artwork. The sheep may end up eating his art!
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Thank you for reading today!
Comment from Janetsue
Loved your script, my friend...especially the Museum malapropism. This is light-hearted fun and it makes a wonderful read on a dreary day. Thank you for sharing!!
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Loved your script, my friend...especially the Museum malapropism. This is light-hearted fun and it makes a wonderful read on a dreary day. Thank you for sharing!!
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Thank you for an enthusiastic review!
Comment from w.j.debi
Just what I needed to brighten the day. I'm glad Shane and Shorty have returned, or pre-returned to visit us. I enjoyed the humor of these two cabin fevered cowboys. I hope they have enough beans to do the art and still have something to eat. It would be awful if they had to resort to eating the artwork. Molasses and popcorn, I can't even imaging.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Just what I needed to brighten the day. I'm glad Shane and Shorty have returned, or pre-returned to visit us. I enjoyed the humor of these two cabin fevered cowboys. I hope they have enough beans to do the art and still have something to eat. It would be awful if they had to resort to eating the artwork. Molasses and popcorn, I can't even imaging.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Thank you kindly for such a specific review. Glad you liked it.
Comment from Michele Harber
Ah yes, the infamous cabin fever, which I'm living through right now with my husband and teenage daughter. I can get through it by reading and writing, but my daughter's definitely having a rougher go of it.
I enjoyed your script. The characters are fun and funny, and their hijinks believable. I can certainly see doing crafts out of beans if that's what you've got, just as there's an amazing artist I've seen on TV who does incredible portraits out of rice.
The dialogue, with the occasional malapropism, is humorous and gave me a well-needed smile on another stay-at-home day.
Good luck with your self-quarantine and taking care of your mother.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Ah yes, the infamous cabin fever, which I'm living through right now with my husband and teenage daughter. I can get through it by reading and writing, but my daughter's definitely having a rougher go of it.
I enjoyed your script. The characters are fun and funny, and their hijinks believable. I can certainly see doing crafts out of beans if that's what you've got, just as there's an amazing artist I've seen on TV who does incredible portraits out of rice.
The dialogue, with the occasional malapropism, is humorous and gave me a well-needed smile on another stay-at-home day.
Good luck with your self-quarantine and taking care of your mother.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for your kind and personalized review!
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It was my pleasure, Crystie.
Comment from royowen
Well done Crystie with your sequel /prequel to your previous creation. This looks a like a tongue-in-cheek one, like the the other my friend. John and Short are two good characters in you script writing, well done, blessings, Roy
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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Well done Crystie with your sequel /prequel to your previous creation. This looks a like a tongue-in-cheek one, like the the other my friend. John and Short are two good characters in you script writing, well done, blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for reviewing, Roy!
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Most welcome Crystie