Each day is the same
We live day to day in surreal times3 total reviews
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
It may seem the same for some. To me, it seems like I have never been so busy in my life doing new things. I don't get bored at all. Am I the only one?
Your 2-10-2 is good but shows me a sleepy attitude that I think is not needed.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
It may seem the same for some. To me, it seems like I have never been so busy in my life doing new things. I don't get bored at all. Am I the only one?
Your 2-10-2 is good but shows me a sleepy attitude that I think is not needed.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Thanks for the review. I was only joking. I also am doing lots of things and of course we are lucky to have our writing.
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I know, I know!...let's remain optimistic and keep writing!
Comment from Angelina Alaimo
This is an excellent poem and depicts our times at the moment. Our loneliness and isolation we are all feeling at this present time. We no longer no what day it is, for time seems all the same in isolation. The picture you used speaks volumes.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
This is an excellent poem and depicts our times at the moment. Our loneliness and isolation we are all feeling at this present time. We no longer no what day it is, for time seems all the same in isolation. The picture you used speaks volumes.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Many thanks
Comment from Bill Schott
This 2-10-2, Each Day Is the Same, has the proper formatting with the exception of an extra syllable in the first line. I would suggest eliminating the word JUST. Happy day.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
This 2-10-2, Each Day Is the Same, has the proper formatting with the exception of an extra syllable in the first line. I would suggest eliminating the word JUST. Happy day.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Sorry I am an idiot.
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On-ly just.......Looks like three to me.