The Corona saga
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Faker, pretender and the rest"to keep my sanity in time of pandemic
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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Your stories are so good to read even though they are about coronavirus, a deadly killer if not stopped. I find that our county we live in is good; so far so good. I hope it stays that way. Prayers.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Your stories are so good to read even though they are about coronavirus, a deadly killer if not stopped. I find that our county we live in is good; so far so good. I hope it stays that way. Prayers.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Stay safe my friend, no country is safe right now
Comment from Darlene Franklin
An interesting perspective. I love your names for everyone. What class do I fit in, I wonder, locked down for my own protection? Thanks for bringing a sense of humor to this craziness.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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An interesting perspective. I love your names for everyone. What class do I fit in, I wonder, locked down for my own protection? Thanks for bringing a sense of humor to this craziness.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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mmm let me see a new category, cautiousness:) Thank you for reading and also thank you for your patience:)Stay safe my friend.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I get your angst about the evil covid-19. You did a good job with this day's entry. I like the way you used bold type for emphasis. Your explanations for each are not far from the truth. Your image choice is great--soo sinister looking. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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I get your angst about the evil covid-19. You did a good job with this day's entry. I like the way you used bold type for emphasis. Your explanations for each are not far from the truth. Your image choice is great--soo sinister looking. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much Jan:)
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL! And entertaining offering, Iza, laced with a whole lotta facts we need to be aware of, my lady! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
visa, and doesn't --> visa and doesn't
brought as lots --> brought us lots
At the beginning it was just a lovely touch, silly us, we reason that is the seasonal flu. We thought that we are safe, because most of us are vegetarians and in Canada is illegal to eat snakes, bats and other "delicacies." -- In the beginning, it was just a lovely touch. Silly us, we reasoned that it was the seasonal flu. We thought that we were safe because most of us are vegetarians, and in Canada, it is illegal to eat snakes, bats and other "delicacies." [for delicacies here, choose either italics or quotation marks, not both... ;)]
doctors, nooo, I want my mommy! --> doctors, and nooo, "I want my mommy"!
province they have --> province, they have
sorry, I -> sorry. I
lost much more, but as I was saying before, it's scarry.... --> lost many more, but, as I was saying before, it's scary....
fakers; panicers, alarmists and hoarders, fake --> fakers; panickers, alarmists and hoarders; fake
this literary, go home and dissapear... --> this literally: they go home and disappear.
Other are pretending that are --> Others are pretending that they are
fakers, who are pretending that are sick --> fakers who are pretending that they are sick
them, because you are concern about --> them because you are concerned about
meantime you have --> meantime, you have
you my sisters --> you, my sisters
Overnight they become --> Overnight, they become
First they kill people left and right, based --> First, they kill people left and right based [did you really mean to say that they are actually KILLING people with bad statistics...???]
advice in how --> advice on how OR advice as to how
bleach; garlic, onions, voodoo; she hates soap and water, and --> bleach, garlic, onions, and voodoo. She hates soap and water and
d'resistence, and a new wave --> de resistance and a new way
of the global warming. True to be told, if that was the case, shouldn't she be aleardy... --> of global warming. Truth be told, if that was the case, shouldn't she be already...
to kill it either --> to kill her either
They barely can move into that house, but are happy that dodget --> They can barely move in their house, but they are happy to have dodged
share, nope! --> share? Nope!
Hibernation and watch --> Hibernation, and watch
hope, you will survive --> hope you survive
Finally we have the good, aka Fake Samaritan, who carries the virus, and he knows that, but wants to give you a present to remember. --> Finally, we have the good, aka Fake, Samaritan who knowingly carries the virus but wants to give you a present to remember.
guy, who came from Germany and went to --> guy who came from Germany. He went to
sexy lady is --> deadly Lady is
bye-bye baby: eeny, --> bye-bye,Baby... eeny,
away, I have --> away: I have
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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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LOL! And entertaining offering, Iza, laced with a whole lotta facts we need to be aware of, my lady! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
visa, and doesn't --> visa and doesn't
brought as lots --> brought us lots
At the beginning it was just a lovely touch, silly us, we reason that is the seasonal flu. We thought that we are safe, because most of us are vegetarians and in Canada is illegal to eat snakes, bats and other "delicacies." -- In the beginning, it was just a lovely touch. Silly us, we reasoned that it was the seasonal flu. We thought that we were safe because most of us are vegetarians, and in Canada, it is illegal to eat snakes, bats and other "delicacies." [for delicacies here, choose either italics or quotation marks, not both... ;)]
doctors, nooo, I want my mommy! --> doctors, and nooo, "I want my mommy"!
province they have --> province, they have
sorry, I -> sorry. I
lost much more, but as I was saying before, it's scarry.... --> lost many more, but, as I was saying before, it's scary....
fakers; panicers, alarmists and hoarders, fake --> fakers; panickers, alarmists and hoarders; fake
this literary, go home and dissapear... --> this literally: they go home and disappear.
Other are pretending that are --> Others are pretending that they are
fakers, who are pretending that are sick --> fakers who are pretending that they are sick
them, because you are concern about --> them because you are concerned about
meantime you have --> meantime, you have
you my sisters --> you, my sisters
Overnight they become --> Overnight, they become
First they kill people left and right, based --> First, they kill people left and right based [did you really mean to say that they are actually KILLING people with bad statistics...???]
advice in how --> advice on how OR advice as to how
bleach; garlic, onions, voodoo; she hates soap and water, and --> bleach, garlic, onions, and voodoo. She hates soap and water and
d'resistence, and a new wave --> de resistance and a new way
of the global warming. True to be told, if that was the case, shouldn't she be aleardy... --> of global warming. Truth be told, if that was the case, shouldn't she be already...
to kill it either --> to kill her either
They barely can move into that house, but are happy that dodget --> They can barely move in their house, but they are happy to have dodged
share, nope! --> share? Nope!
Hibernation and watch --> Hibernation, and watch
hope, you will survive --> hope you survive
Finally we have the good, aka Fake Samaritan, who carries the virus, and he knows that, but wants to give you a present to remember. --> Finally, we have the good, aka Fake, Samaritan who knowingly carries the virus but wants to give you a present to remember.
guy, who came from Germany and went to --> guy who came from Germany. He went to
sexy lady is --> deadly Lady is
bye-bye baby: eeny, --> bye-bye,Baby... eeny,
away, I have --> away: I have
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Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for taking the time to correct all my errors, as usual I really appreciate your encouragements and the grammar.
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👍 Anytime, my lady!
Comment from BeasPeas
This is very well written, Iza. The 24-hour media coverage doesn't help and fuels the fire as newscasters do their best to sensationalize. I think you've covered the aspects well. Marilyn
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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This is very well written, Iza. The 24-hour media coverage doesn't help and fuels the fire as newscasters do their best to sensationalize. I think you've covered the aspects well. Marilyn
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Thank You so much, please try to keep the head above the panic, I know is not easy, but we must keep the faith.
Comment from lyenochka
Enjoyed your humor and I hope you will stay sane and healthy despite the craziness there. It's the same here.
Please let me know if you want me to ignore your typos and misspellings. It adds extra time to point them out but if you don't care, then I won't take the time. Most of these will be caught if you type in another program (like Word, or GoogleDocs) first.
Comments:
"and fakers; panicers, alarmists " (panickers) to keep the 'k' sound as 'ce' becomes an 's' sound. Neither is a real word.
"that took this literary, go home and dissapear." (literally - not literary) and (disappear)
" for the fake Samaritean!" (Samaritan)
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Enjoyed your humor and I hope you will stay sane and healthy despite the craziness there. It's the same here.
Please let me know if you want me to ignore your typos and misspellings. It adds extra time to point them out but if you don't care, then I won't take the time. Most of these will be caught if you type in another program (like Word, or GoogleDocs) first.
Comments:
"and fakers; panicers, alarmists " (panickers) to keep the 'k' sound as 'ce' becomes an 's' sound. Neither is a real word.
"that took this literary, go home and dissapear." (literally - not literary) and (disappear)
" for the fake Samaritean!" (Samaritan)
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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If you have time, I do appreciate the grammar section:), but if you don't have time, that is fine too. I am grateful for taking the time to read my rant against this ugly virus.
Comment from patcelaw
Itis so sad that in a time like this with the virus that people are trying to take advantage of their fellowman. I hope that many will decide to follow the rules. I know that in the short run things can be painful, but we need to do right so society can get back on a normal footing.
Patricia
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Itis so sad that in a time like this with the virus that people are trying to take advantage of their fellowman. I hope that many will decide to follow the rules. I know that in the short run things can be painful, but we need to do right so society can get back on a normal footing.
Patricia
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Amen to that!
Comment from royowen
Somehow I doubt that climate change has anything to do with the covid-19, and the good thing about is Beijing's pollution has gone back to practically nil. Well done, you're right Canada's not the only one, it really is pandemic, it's about mankind, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : She brought (as) lots of love...us? 2: it's ( scarry) scary? Alaerdy dead. Already?
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Somehow I doubt that climate change has anything to do with the covid-19, and the good thing about is Beijing's pollution has gone back to practically nil. Well done, you're right Canada's not the only one, it really is pandemic, it's about mankind, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : She brought (as) lots of love...us? 2: it's ( scarry) scary? Alaerdy dead. Already?
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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I know, but I can't fight with them anymore
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You?ll be fine, have faith
Comment from estory
You have a great sarcastic tone in this and in some ways it speaks for the frustrations of all of us. It really seems there is no way out of the abyss, no matter what the powers that be seem to try. Italy has been on locked down for two weeks and it seems to have no effect. We have our eye out suspiciously for everyone who comes along. Even that guy with the birthday present for his mom. "Thanks buddy, come again!" loved the sarcastic tone there. Hey we have to keep our sense of humor or we'll never get through it. And Keep the faith. estory
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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You have a great sarcastic tone in this and in some ways it speaks for the frustrations of all of us. It really seems there is no way out of the abyss, no matter what the powers that be seem to try. Italy has been on locked down for two weeks and it seems to have no effect. We have our eye out suspiciously for everyone who comes along. Even that guy with the birthday present for his mom. "Thanks buddy, come again!" loved the sarcastic tone there. Hey we have to keep our sense of humor or we'll never get through it. And Keep the faith. estory
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Thank you, and let's pray for a better day!
Comment from padumachitta
hello
I live in Europe. It is dire hee. Please just stay home. Wash your hands.
Here where it is flooding through, learn from us.
Yes, there are all sorts of crap people...and lots of it is just ignorance, no one wants to harm any one.
You don't know you have it, don't know you are carrying it,
and people don't really know how to isolate, we are so used to being in touch...
any way your peice was thought provoking..
but, as i sit hee with my nearest city on semi lock down I can only hope that my homeland;Canada, is wiser than Europe.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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hello
I live in Europe. It is dire hee. Please just stay home. Wash your hands.
Here where it is flooding through, learn from us.
Yes, there are all sorts of crap people...and lots of it is just ignorance, no one wants to harm any one.
You don't know you have it, don't know you are carrying it,
and people don't really know how to isolate, we are so used to being in touch...
any way your peice was thought provoking..
but, as i sit hee with my nearest city on semi lock down I can only hope that my homeland;Canada, is wiser than Europe.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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I am so sad to break your hope, but we are still in denial and we think that is not real.
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I?m not in denial. It?s worse here than the news says...
But... it?s not hope to practice hygiene or self isolation.
We must slow the fast rate of this so the hospitals aren?t swamped.
70 percent of us will still be infected... but slowe rather than fast.... it?s about beds and time to find either a vaccine or a way to deal with it.
We?re hooped... but we can still act responsibly...and be compassionate and supportive.
