Celestial Secret
Shhhhhh...15 total reviews
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Moonlight has its own whispering that all is well. "Rest peacefully knowing God is in control, and He knows what is happening. Everything is His will on earth just as it is in Heaven." Then the right joyful sun arises in the morning.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Moonlight has its own whispering that all is well. "Rest peacefully knowing God is in control, and He knows what is happening. Everything is His will on earth just as it is in Heaven." Then the right joyful sun arises in the morning.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Amen. Many thanks for your review... =)
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All will be well in the end.
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That is certainly the one guarantee we have, yes? ;) Take care of you over there!! ;)
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"Guarantee", the perfect word for this situation.
Comment from Shirley McLain
Great verse and you have my vote. you did an excellent job with you poem as well as it's setting. Beautiful picture as well as words. Good luck in the contest. Shirley
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Great verse and you have my vote. you did an excellent job with you poem as well as it's setting. Beautiful picture as well as words. Good luck in the contest. Shirley
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Oh my goodness, Shirley, you just put a smile on my face amidst all these gray (and white and lightish gray and darker light gray...lol!) skies!! ;) ;) Thank you for your wonderful comments and for those bright, shiny stars!! :) May you find some brightness in your week ahead - take care! ;)
Comment from LisaMay
Your poem's reference to masquerade makes me think of a mask that the moon might be wearing, as it reflects the sun's rays in night time that is a hint of the day's sunshine to come (or an echo of the day's rays just past).
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Your poem's reference to masquerade makes me think of a mask that the moon might be wearing, as it reflects the sun's rays in night time that is a hint of the day's sunshine to come (or an echo of the day's rays just past).
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much!!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
Nice presentation and poem. Syllable count is good. The message is very positive. . I like it. Good luck with the contest.
Gypsy ð???
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Hello my friend
Nice presentation and poem. Syllable count is good. The message is very positive. . I like it. Good luck with the contest.
Gypsy ð???
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much!!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I like the methaphor you choose for the moonlight, and the picture you chose complements the masquerade. And what a contradiction between the ray moon and the sunshine. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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I like the methaphor you choose for the moonlight, and the picture you chose complements the masquerade. And what a contradiction between the ray moon and the sunshine. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much!!
Comment from Drew Delaney
That is a wonderful and pretty presentation for your poem. And with personification to boot. Nice work. I wish you well in the contest. Also, I should mention there is the comparison factor as well.
Drew
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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That is a wonderful and pretty presentation for your poem. And with personification to boot. Nice work. I wish you well in the contest. Also, I should mention there is the comparison factor as well.
Drew
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much!!
Comment from Gloria ....
Well isn't this just sublime. Clever, unique and perfect presentation to allude to the diffuse light of the sun from the moon.
A beautiful entry into the contest and best of luck to you in the voting booth.
Gloria
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Well isn't this just sublime. Clever, unique and perfect presentation to allude to the diffuse light of the sun from the moon.
A beautiful entry into the contest and best of luck to you in the voting booth.
Gloria
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Thank you so very much!!
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for sharing your interpretation of the 2-10-2 form with which I was unfamiliar. The artwork you selected certainly set the stage for your description and your embedding the words into it is very effective. I can't wait to see another full moon in person. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Thank you for sharing your interpretation of the 2-10-2 form with which I was unfamiliar. The artwork you selected certainly set the stage for your description and your embedding the words into it is very effective. I can't wait to see another full moon in person. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much!!
Comment from Alchera
Perfectly set and fixed within its beautiful chosen picture. The syllables counting is exact throughout its mesmerizing structural selected words and narrative storyline content. An Amazing word indeed!
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Perfectly set and fixed within its beautiful chosen picture. The syllables counting is exact throughout its mesmerizing structural selected words and narrative storyline content. An Amazing word indeed!
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Oh my goodness, Tony, you just put a smile on my face amidst all these gray (and white and lightish gray and darker light gray...lol!) skies!! lol! Thank you for your wonderful comments and for those bright, shiny stars!! :) May you find some brightness in your week ahead - take care! ;)
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Here we remain at home with your grandchildren. . We can go out and thevirus is getting towards where we live now so we have to pay attention . Blessings And take care of yourself, too!Tony
Comment from George Anderson
I'm mesmerized by the wording you chose for this poem. I like the flow of it and the mystery that entails this poem. Beautifully written! Good luck with the contest
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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I'm mesmerized by the wording you chose for this poem. I like the flow of it and the mystery that entails this poem. Beautifully written! Good luck with the contest
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much!!
