World Peace
2-10-2 Poem15 total reviews
Comment from Cindy Decker
I love the sentiment of your poem! It's something we really need; I hope our leaders are listening. The photo is nice--a pastel softness. Your word count is perfect. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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I love the sentiment of your poem! It's something we really need; I hope our leaders are listening. The photo is nice--a pastel softness. Your word count is perfect. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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Thank you! This poem didn't win in the contest, but thanks for the support! Much appreciated! I'm happy you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from RShipp
You obeyed the requirements of the contest.
You chose a great illustration to accompany your poem.
Best of luck in the "2-10-2 Poem" writing contest.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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You obeyed the requirements of the contest.
You chose a great illustration to accompany your poem.
Best of luck in the "2-10-2 Poem" writing contest.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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Thanks! The contest is over. I didn't win. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from Gloria ....
Hi Raul excellent entry into this contest. A big hope and perhaps it is achievable if we eventually find an enemy outside ourselves to fight with.
Many thanks for sharing your thoughts today. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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Hi Raul excellent entry into this contest. A big hope and perhaps it is achievable if we eventually find an enemy outside ourselves to fight with.
Many thanks for sharing your thoughts today. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 03-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Good job with the correct syllable count per line. I love the picture your paired with your thought-provoking words. It would be awesome to have world peace! Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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Good job with the correct syllable count per line. I love the picture your paired with your thought-provoking words. It would be awesome to have world peace! Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 02-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from moongirlwriter
so sorry for the delay in reading your poem. . .you are so right, the world is falling apart but with God, "all things are possible". I truly believe that and will always pray for World Peace. :) Nicely done.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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so sorry for the delay in reading your poem. . .you are so right, the world is falling apart but with God, "all things are possible". I truly believe that and will always pray for World Peace. :) Nicely done.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed my poem!
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Comment from flylikeaneagle
PenPal: our nations need to work for the Lord and not man.
We can connect our gifts and talents. One Kentucky distiller
is making up hand sanitizers for first relief people. Others are
sewing masks. Hands helping each other creates peace.
flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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PenPal: our nations need to work for the Lord and not man.
We can connect our gifts and talents. One Kentucky distiller
is making up hand sanitizers for first relief people. Others are
sewing masks. Hands helping each other creates peace.
flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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I agree with you! Thank you! I appreciate it!
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Our world needs not only world peace but also God.
We have forgotten God, and we are reminded now how powerful and almighty He is. He is in control and He has just tapped us all on the shoulder.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Our world needs not only world peace but also God.
We have forgotten God, and we are reminded now how powerful and almighty He is. He is in control and He has just tapped us all on the shoulder.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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I agree with you! Thank you! I appreciate it!
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He will see us through too
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a very nice thought. I hope you're right that we can accomplish what we need, world peace. It is falling apart. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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This is a very nice thought. I hope you're right that we can accomplish what we need, world peace. It is falling apart. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Thank you! I appreciate it!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
Nice presentation and poem. Syllable count is good. The message is very positive. . I like it. Good luck with the contest.
Gypsy ð???
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Hello my friend
Nice presentation and poem. Syllable count is good. The message is very positive. . I like it. Good luck with the contest.
Gypsy ð???
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Thank you! I appreciate it!
Comment from samandlancelot
World peace has been a desire of every generation. I wonder about the Tower of Babel when God confused languages so man could not work together.
It doesn't make sense to me.
Patricia
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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World peace has been a desire of every generation. I wonder about the Tower of Babel when God confused languages so man could not work together.
It doesn't make sense to me.
Patricia
Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thank you! I appreciate it!