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Viewing comments for Chapter 51 "A World Not Defeated "Poetry and Short Stories by George Medina Martinez
4 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi George. Your poem reflects the span of poetry over the globe and how humans relate to it. Final stanza is one of the best. All stanzas written in monorhyme unite the piece. I still find your use of caps mid sentence distracting, but I know that is your style. Marilyn
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Hi George. Your poem reflects the span of poetry over the globe and how humans relate to it. Final stanza is one of the best. All stanzas written in monorhyme unite the piece. I still find your use of caps mid sentence distracting, but I know that is your style. Marilyn
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Thank you for the review and compliments. Old Habits die hard with the Caps as I didn't included a Second Similar Poem in this one, just used the Caps to emphasize certain word. Blessings and Prayers for all of our Safety.
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That's okay. I know that's what you do.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
You've captured the fear, with your monorhyme verses, that's sweeping the world because of the Corona Virus, and also that - it's a big World Together! - hopefully we can -
come together, and Not Live in Spiritual Desolation -
nicely done.
cheers.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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You've captured the fear, with your monorhyme verses, that's sweeping the world because of the Corona Virus, and also that - it's a big World Together! - hopefully we can -
come together, and Not Live in Spiritual Desolation -
nicely done.
cheers.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Amen, Thank you for the review and comments, Please Stay Safe and may God Bless you.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your challenge club entry. You did a great job expressing your thought/feelings. I really enjoyed the monorhyme per verse. Your words flow well with great imagery and a true story from your POV. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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I enjoyed your challenge club entry. You did a great job expressing your thought/feelings. I really enjoyed the monorhyme per verse. Your words flow well with great imagery and a true story from your POV. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
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Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thank you, Blessings and Prayers to you and your Family for Safety, and Comfort during this Pandemic.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I love your poem, it captured very well the world hysteria. You are so right, all the nations are now united because of this global pandemic. Hopefully will go away soon, so we can breathe again. Thank you for sharing and stay healthy, my friend.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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I love your poem, it captured very well the world hysteria. You are so right, all the nations are now united because of this global pandemic. Hopefully will go away soon, so we can breathe again. Thank you for sharing and stay healthy, my friend.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thank you for the review, Blessings and Prayers to you and your Family during these trying times also.