Oh Life!
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Comment from donaldww
You have surpassed my powers of comprehension with this poem, or should I call it a riddle? Whatever, even winking at it didn't help me.
The irony is, all of the words you defined in your notes were obvious to me. Trust my heart, it's all of the other words that I found perplexing.
Coleridge said that "poetry is best words in the best order." I challenge you to catch the meaning of these words.
Cheers,
DW
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You have surpassed my powers of comprehension with this poem, or should I call it a riddle? Whatever, even winking at it didn't help me.
The irony is, all of the words you defined in your notes were obvious to me. Trust my heart, it's all of the other words that I found perplexing.
Coleridge said that "poetry is best words in the best order." I challenge you to catch the meaning of these words.
Cheers,
DW
Comment Written 10-Apr-2013
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
I am beginning to understand your poetry more and more. First of all your syllable form is right on. The hidden word is LOSS and the meaning of the poem is profound. Good job as usual. Carolyn
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I am beginning to understand your poetry more and more. First of all your syllable form is right on. The hidden word is LOSS and the meaning of the poem is profound. Good job as usual. Carolyn
Comment Written 10-Apr-2013
Comment from vapros
Three stars today for your creation, in which I have found nothing reasonable. The concepts written here, even examined separately, seem to have no message for the reader.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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Three stars today for your creation, in which I have found nothing reasonable. The concepts written here, even examined separately, seem to have no message for the reader.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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THANKS.
Comment from Norbanus
Each day I find another verse
to try for a reflection
it seems my rhymes are always worse
and sometimes change direction
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Each day I find another verse
to try for a reflection
it seems my rhymes are always worse
and sometimes change direction
Comment Written 10-Apr-2013
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Alcreator,
Well you have stumped me as to what the hidden word is. But to be very honest I don't get much from this poem. I wish I could get inside you head which wpuld help me to understand the meaning. Oh well...you get a five anyway for the effort....chey
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Hi Alcreator,
Well you have stumped me as to what the hidden word is. But to be very honest I don't get much from this poem. I wish I could get inside you head which wpuld help me to understand the meaning. Oh well...you get a five anyway for the effort....chey
Comment Written 10-Apr-2013
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Monday? The start of a new week, vowed to start over and do it right, but losing the will by midweek and giving up by Friday, only to begin again with new determination on Monday.
That's the best I can do with this jumble of words. :)
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Monday? The start of a new week, vowed to start over and do it right, but losing the will by midweek and giving up by Friday, only to begin again with new determination on Monday.
That's the best I can do with this jumble of words. :)
Comment Written 10-Apr-2013
Comment from TiffanyLeeBaldwin
What a cool style of a poem. I'm not to familiar with it yet but from what I have read about how to format it. You did an amazing job!! Your vocabulary is spectacular and I thank you for the key. The power and emotion behind your words .... wow..I'm just high disappointed at the fact .. I don't have a six star.. Great Write and piece of art and I look forward to reading more of your poetry.
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What a cool style of a poem. I'm not to familiar with it yet but from what I have read about how to format it. You did an amazing job!! Your vocabulary is spectacular and I thank you for the key. The power and emotion behind your words .... wow..I'm just high disappointed at the fact .. I don't have a six star.. Great Write and piece of art and I look forward to reading more of your poetry.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2013
Comment from Black_Oxygen
With very few words, this poetry challenges the reader.
The attached photo is a befitting accent the enhances
the message. Thank You for your creation.
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With very few words, this poetry challenges the reader.
The attached photo is a befitting accent the enhances
the message. Thank You for your creation.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2013
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello . Alcreator Litt Dear
I may be way off the track
Are you saying--
With death how quickly you can just have your life taken away. You could just be gone in the blink of an eye?
Gert
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Hello . Alcreator Litt Dear
I may be way off the track
Are you saying--
With death how quickly you can just have your life taken away. You could just be gone in the blink of an eye?
Gert
Comment Written 10-Apr-2013
Comment from jmdg1954
The word amongst this mish-mush of words thrown together is 'Monday' from the tale end of summon and day.
If this is correct, you, may! Pass... GO!
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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The word amongst this mish-mush of words thrown together is 'Monday' from the tale end of summon and day.
If this is correct, you, may! Pass... GO!
Comment Written 10-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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THANKS.
